Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat

Okie dokie ^^

I love the mask with the hairpin ^^ Very cute. Overall its cute yet plain and un matching. The few items that do match are from a set and the pants under the skirt kinda blend. As much as I hate saying this, I would unequipped everything and really think about what you want on your avi. There isn't enough white on top and the black seems to over power this avi. SO Really think of what you want people to see when they look at your avi and what you want their reactions to be. I find it plain yet cute at the same time but nothing I would look at for a long time.

6/10 I like the colors and some of the items used but thats about it. :/ sorry if it seems harsh but I don't know how else to go about it. Please don't hate me TT

Grrr Foxxi hates joo!xDD Jk. Thanks for saying es bad! Foxxi didn't like et much anyways.xD

Hey Divine. <3 I'm finally taking people's advice with my avatar. I uncluttered it a bit. My hair is shorter, I took off the hairpin because I didn't need gold on the top any more, and I unequipped my balloon from hell. Do you think it looks better?

Thanks a lot!

Originally Posted by wish

could i have some critiques on this avvy? I'm finding a hard time looking for a head item that would work. :/

Well the first one is cute but plain on top. The second one has more on top but the pin doesn't work so to speak. If you were to use the C-pin You would have to bring in some more blue and pink to make it all flow and match better. Maybe pink sock, belt, necklace and Blue gloves, fire flies, you could use the tiara or the winter night bonnet.

At this point I would work with the second avi and try adding colors from the c-pin through out the rest of the avi. Its hard but it can be done..kinda ^^

first avi - 6/10 cute but a few set items
Second avi- 7/10 cute as well but need more color for the c-pin to pull it off ^^

Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~

Grrr Foxxi hates joo!xDD Jk. Thanks for saying es bad! Foxxi didn't like et much anyways.xD

It wasn't horrible just need a lot of work >.<; Don't hate me XD

Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Hey Divine. <3 I'm finally taking people's advice with my avatar. I uncluttered it a bit. My hair is shorter, I took off the hairpin because I didn't need gold on the top any more, and I unequipped my balloon from hell. Do you think it looks better?

Thanks a lot!

Good for you, though I always like the cluttered avis ^^ but then again I like random things XD

Okay lets start this ^^

I like the hair ^^ I have the same one, just different color XD

Okay back to your avi^^

I like the flow and the colors chosen to be used with this avi. The colors are used through out the avi and flow all the way to the feet. I would like to see more red about the feet but I can see the hints of red down the legs and around the ankled. I love to see a white belt with this, I think it would really tie in all the white better to the avi. But I don't think they do,m the closes shade to white would be the pale pink and thats not going to work. I might suggest using the white scarf, its long enough in the front to pull white along the front and mid section on the avi. Then again thats just a suggestion ^^ Maybe white on the hands? I dunno the mid section is lacking a lot of white....mmmm

Overall 7/10, the colors are nice and the flow is right but is lacks white in the mid section. :/

Could You Rate me and tell me what ind of clothes I need to put on the bottom? I have no idea whatsoever to choose, I was wondering if you could help me out, since I'm really bad at fashion, and tell me what I should lose. ^_^ Thanks.

Originally Posted by Princess Emeraude

Could You Rate me and tell me what ind of clothes I need to put on the bottom? I have no idea whatsoever to choose, I was wondering if you could help me out, since I'm really bad at fashion, and tell me what I should lose. ^_^ Thanks.

Well so far you only avi two items on.... so I guess at this point a black skirt to match the other black items? If you gave me an idea on your kinda theme you wanna go for or color scheme, I think I could be a bigger help to you ^^


or even some items you like to get, that could help too

Well I'd like to get the Queens crown. And I want a kinda royal sexy kind of theme. ^_^
And I have to go now, so if you could PM me thanks

Originally Posted by Princess Emeraude

Well I'd like to get the Queens crown. And I want a kinda royal sexy kind of theme. ^_^
And I have to go now, so if you could PM me thanks

Royal sexy? mmm I think I can do that. Give me awhile to think it over ^^ I'll send an pm once I have it figured out.

Divine| That's exactly what I was thinking. i had a red belt, but I changed it to grey just so I could get more white. I think I'ma try out some harem sleevegloves- I'll get back to you. Thank you.

Voila. I went back to the navy.
xD

What do you think of this one Divine? Do you like this top better or the one from before?

Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Divine| That's exactly what I was thinking. i had a red belt, but I changed it to grey just so I could get more white. I think I'ma try out some harem sleevegloves- I'll get back to you. Thank you.

Really? Well it sounds like you knew what you were doing lol but yeah I can't wait to see what you come up with next ^^

Originally Posted by Korrye

Voila. I went back to the navy.
xD

What do you think of this one Divine? Do you like this top better or the one from before?

I like it, though the green tends to over power the blue. Try adding a blue top under the dress to bring more blue to the mid section and shoulders^^ other wise its very nice and a good change XD

I've revamped my avatar so many times today I don't even want to count.

I LOVE the one I have right now. I love the bare shoulders and neck. I've never really liked that in an avatar before but I think it looks really pretty! I know that I should probably get a gold neck item, but I'm waiting for the v-day event to finish it off. =) I love this hairstyle, too.. My avatar seems very sweet to me. Idk why. xD

EDIT: Oops, I forgot to ask you what you think. lol.

Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

I've revamped my avatar so many times today I don't even want to count.

I LOVE the one I have right now. I love the bare shoulders and neck. I've never really liked that in an avatar before but I think it looks really pretty! I know that I should probably get a gold neck item, but I'm waiting for the v-day event to finish it off. =) I love this hairstyle, too.. My avatar seems very sweet to me. Idk why. xD

EDIT: Oops, I forgot to ask you what you think. lol.

lol okay let me take a look at it ^^

Well the bare shoulder look is cute but theres nothing else bare, flesh wise. Mayeb if you lost the gloves and went with cuffs, and then lost the stockings...It could help the over all look. Then you could lose the ear muffs and just stick with the bare basics lol

So red cuffs, lose all white items and just stuck with red, black, gold and bare skin. I think that would help with the over all look of the avi and help keep it uncluttered and keep the cute bare shoulders.

Over all it gets a 7/10 because right now your focus is the neck before the head. Thats only because the flesh really pops against all the colors on the avi. So lose a few items and it will help make the flesh less poppy and get the flow back to head to toe. ^^ Hope thats helps

May you please rate my latest avatar creation?

Edit: and my improved previous avvie:

Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess

May you please rate my latest avatar creation?

Edit: and my improved previous avvie:

Of course ^^

Your current avi is very nice to look at. The flow is head to toe and most of the colors flow all the way down to the feet. I think with this avi I would suggest either blue shoes or blue stockings to bring down the blue all the way down to the feet on the avi itself. Maybe add a black hand held in the left hand to go over the white of the skirt to break it all up and maybe a white hand held in the right.

Over all on your current 7/10, needs more blue to make the blue balance in the avi and just a few accs. to make it flare.


Okay onto the other:

Heres the original: And the improved one:



Well in the first one it looked more white and in the second one it looks more creamy/ brown. I like the red on the sleeves, but I would suggest going back to the ruby tiara virus the diamond one. It looks like you added red earings which brings more red into the avi and thats good. I wish the bow could be red to break up all the brown.

Over all I like the first one better still.

7/10 its nice and you add a few good things to but the bow is a bit to much in that color. I like the hair style better and necklace as well. But that bow drags it down :/

Edit: I looked at it again and the bow does work but theres to much brown up top. Maybe a different hair color could help with that?

Thanks Divine! I'm going to try to pull it off with the C-pin and get on your list. ;3!!

'Cause I love the full layering look of the bottom of the purple avvy stuff. XD <3

divvy businesses going quite well eh?XD
how s my new valentine avi?XD

Hey Divine!
I'm back.
XD
I need help on how to add more gold in,
And black at the bottom.
I was thinking of maybe the black purse?
The gold belt is too thick,
So I'm saving for the doubled one.
D:
And I need suggestions.

Originally Posted by wish

Thanks Divine! I'm going to try to pull it off with the C-pin and get on your list. ;3!!

'Cause I love the full layering look of the bottom of the purple avvy stuff. XD <3

G'luck with that ^^ I think you can do it. lol Layering is fun XD

Originally Posted by foggyday

divvy businesses going quite well eh?XD
how s my new valentine avi?XD

Yup businesses is good ^^ Just need to be on more lol

its cute very V-day appropriate with all the pink, white and red. The flow is head to toe and all the colors flow through out the entire avi. I don't much care for the hair, it bring way to much red into the avi. Maybe a short hair style and maybe some red on the hands? I'm not sure if you can layer gloves with that necklace or not.

7/10 its cute and simple. Maybe to simple, try adding a few extra items to make it stand out ^^

Originally Posted by Eserel

Hey Divine!
I'm back.
XD
I need help on how to add more gold in,
And black at the bottom.
I was thinking of maybe the black purse?
The gold belt is too thick,
So I'm saving for the doubled one.
D:
And I need suggestions.

Uhm,I'm full of suggestion but I think I missed the avi you wanted help with. This one is just in panties, bra and eye patch. Maybe a picture I could use for a ref? Otherwise I have no idea how I can help -.-; Should have been here sooner.

well i cant get admins pick for a long time but will you rate this avi i made out of the new commons please?

Originally Posted by vadeil

well i cant get admins pick for a long time but will you rate this avi i made out of the new commons please?

Tts very aww cute ^^

Looks like you layered a few of the set items to get the over all look. I like it, flow is head to tow and the colors flow through out the entire avi. One down side I see would be the browns and blacks. The gloves,face heat,earings,necklace and hair piece have black while everything that you can see are dark brown. Unless your going with black items on the top and dark brown items on the bottom half of the avi.

Over all 9/10, I like it. Very cute, maybe be set-ish but I still love the overall look and fell of the avi. ^^very well done and congrats on making to my front page...again XD

I like the new items and wanted to test this avatar out, Divine. Please rate my latest creation.

Thank you. <3

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Hey divine... back for more advice on my avi...

Originally Posted by Sakura_Madison

I like the new items and wanted to test this avatar out, Divine. Please rate my latest creation.

Thank you. <3

Its randomly cute ^^

I like how the flow is head to toe and how the colors flow all the way through out the avi. The gold is a nice touch to accent the red and black. Though the white seems to be off and only on the top part of the avi. Maybe add the new cloak to it?

8/10 very nice job ^^

Originally Posted by Kaze-bear

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Hey divine... back for more advice on my avi...

As much I love the lil foxi thing its kinda a different shade of white than the fan, making it pop against your and drawing the eye to it rather than your avi. the belt is a nice touch though and bring black to the mid section of your avi which is nice to see. Maybe add the new heart tattoo to make the face a lil less plain. As for the foxii, uhm you could leave it for now until you figure out if you want to add more white to your avi or think of a way to make it all work out with more balance.

8/10 Its cute but the Foxi draws the eye way to much with this avi:/

XD
You seem to always miss me!
Lol.
I'll change into the outfit later and upload it so you can rate it too.
:>
Rate my valentines avvie?

Originally Posted by Eserel

XD
You seem to always miss me!
Lol.
I'll change into the outfit later and upload it so you can rate it too.
:>
Rate my valentines avvie?

Okay sounds like a plan XD

Oh my, its so cute. Like the use of head item with the face tattoo and bandanna. I like the the look of the avi at first glance but looking at it more I see a few things that I don't care for. The pink/black/white flow all the way through the avi but the Red is only one the skirt and box of candies and possible the hairpin. (not sure if its dark pink or light red XD)

8/10
I think the ying yang shoes would be great with this avi and help bring more black to the bottom as wellas match the hat. The pink gloves are a bit much, maybe try adding a cuff to break it up. As for the red... I have no idea. Either add more or leave as is. I'm sure either was it'll still look cute. ^^