Howabout now without the fox?

Could I get a critique please? ^-^

Can I get a critique on my avvy? ;__;

and perhaps what I could add to make it better? <33

critique please?

by the way, if I add necklaces, it''ll look all cutter-ish.

I'd like some critique please. ^-^

I feel like there's something off with the avatar but I can't figure out what. (You may have to refresh to see the latest one.)

Originally Posted by Kaze-bear

Howabout now without the fox?

well now that you added more black to the avi, try adding some earings to even things up a bit. And then the white/silver on the belt needs to be add tot eh avi as well... maybe a set of earings that would match the belt and some gloves instead of adding black add white/silver?

Originally Posted by 'clockwork

Could I get a critique please? ^-^

Of course you may ^^

Well for starter I like to see more on the head to kinda tame the white band of the ear muffs. It draws your eye the head but not in a good way, more "thats random" way. Other than that the flow does go head to toe and the colors are amazing with this avi. I love how you layered everything and how the colors flow all the way through the avi. I don't however care for the white and how it just seem to out like the frame of the avi so to speak. You have a white band on the head, white on the arms and then the white on the slippers. So in once sense it seems off because theres to no white in the middle but in another it unique because the white is just a bored. It all depends on how you look at it.

9.5/10 I love the colors and though put into this avi, I'm just not sure if I care for the white or not. Maybe add the new belt?

Oh congrats to making it to the front page ^^

Originally Posted by wish

Can I get a critique on my avvy? ;__;

and perhaps what I could add to make it better? <33

Yes you may ^^

I think Some red shoes would be great with this avi to break up all the pink. Maybe add the new pink heart tattoo to bring something to the face, it seems alil empty. I like the flow, head to toe and how the items lay on the avi. Its very v-day worthy ^^ I would suggest some gloves, maybe whit/red? With the shoes you could one of two ways:

You could go with the pink fighter boots and red fishnets

or

go with red shoes and the pink escort leg guards with white stockings.

8/10 I like the colors and the flow of the but the white needs to be more balanced out on the avi as does the red. some white on the head would help a lot.

Originally Posted by L. Lawliet

I guess I'll see just how bad/good my avatar is. O: I'd love a rate, thank you. <3

@ Wishy;; Hi! ^____^

Sure thing ^^

Its cute but its lacking. I think some more red on the head, only because the hairpin is really hard to see against the dark hair. I think a lighter red would really stand out on the avi and help even out the reds on the avi. its plain but not bad. I would suggest trying to find something to add to the avi within the colors your using.

7/10 only because its kinda plain but its not bad, just needs to pop more.

Originally Posted by Lilium`

critique please?

by the way, if I add necklaces, it''ll look all cutter-ish.

As sad as this is to say, I've seen it before. Maybe not with these exact items but a version of it none the less.

I like the cluttered-ness of it and the items used. I think a necklace would be a good idea to help keep it cluttered. The over all idea is very nice but again, seen it before and believe it or not, theses colors are use a lot together. I think yours needs more dark red on top.

7/10... Maybe a red hand held, like the new balloon?

Originally Posted by Neyor

I'd like some critique please. ^-^

I feel like there's something off with the avatar but I can't figure out what. (You may have to refresh to see the latest one.)

Wow 0.o I flat out love it. I think its the socks that are throwing it off... I think it may need more black on the head to draw the black up the avi. It feels very set-ish but I can see you layered different items to get this over all affect. Maybe a different necklace, the chocker that came out during Halloween ( the name escapes) would look great with this avi. Maybe some different socks or stocking would really pull this avi together.

9/10 I love the look of the avi but there are a few things that are off on the avi. Socks, necklace and black head item.

Congrats on making it to the front page ^^

harro L. ^^;;

sorry to ask but where are the pink leg guards?

Thank you. <3

I agree about the black but I haven't found an item yet that does not remove the current items/doesn't cover them. I tried the Yumeh ears and tail but it unequips the band. D: Then I tried the new event pin but it looks a bit bulky since the black from the end of the band peeks out and makes it messy. -has no idea what else she could try- Perhaps I should skip the vday pin and try a black pin instead? Like the black bow? Or just let the black from the headband show. I wonder how the chibi tophat would look.. o: -goes to fiddle some more with it-

Hmm.. I don't know what choker you mean but I'll poke around. What I got on right now that gives the choker effect is the black shiek swimsuit. xD

I had so much trouble with the shoes/socks. D: At first I tried the Amarande boots but that was too much black. Then I tried the shoes I got on atm but I couldn't find any good socks to go with it except these ones. We need more red socks. xD But if I were to remove these socks wouldn't that throw off the balance of the cream?

Thank you again. :D I appriciate the feedback and comments. <3

Hay Divine! Happy Valentine's, dear. : ) Thanks for all you do.

don't rate me, sorry for posting, I lost my shoes and my avatar isn't complete D:

@ Divine ~ Thanks very much for the rate and putting me on the first page. ^-^ I wish there was a white belt or something. The new belt makes it look kinda cluttered in a bad way. :[

divine divine!! I added some red to my avvy near the feet!

what do you think? ^^;;

>D
RAIT DIS AVVEH.
I was thinking of getting the gold and red leg warmers.
But I don't have enough gold right now.

may I get a rate for my current avatar? :3

Will you rate me please?

Alright, I'm ready to be rated now :3 I'm sure you'll nitpick the shoes, and I'm working on changing them. Other then that though, would you mind giving me a rate and such?

I'm not really in the running, but you've got a really good fashion sense. (Better than mine), so if you have time I'd like a review. I'm not used to being this...perky looking. I'm not sure about the boots either.

Thank you for the rating, Divine!

I would like a rating on this avatar:

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Originally Posted by wish

harro L. ^^;;

sorry to ask but where are the pink leg guards?

Ya know, I don't know. I was looking for them the other day and Couldn't find them. I think they may be in one of the last stores..not sure thought. Sorry ^^;

Originally Posted by Neyor

Thank you. <3

I agree about the black but I haven't found an item yet that does not remove the current items/doesn't cover them. I tried the Yumeh ears and tail but it unequips the band. D: Then I tried the new event pin but it looks a bit bulky since the black from the end of the band peeks out and makes it messy. -has no idea what else she could try- Perhaps I should skip the vday pin and try a black pin instead? Like the black bow? Or just let the black from the headband show. I wonder how the chibi tophat would look.. o: -goes to fiddle some more with it-

Hmm.. I don't know what choker you mean but I'll poke around. What I got on right now that gives the choker effect is the black shiek swimsuit. xD

I had so much trouble with the shoes/socks. D: At first I tried the Amarande boots but that was too much black. Then I tried the shoes I got on atm but I couldn't find any good socks to go with it except these ones. We need more red socks. xD But if I were to remove these socks wouldn't that throw off the balance of the cream?

Thank you again. :D I appriciate the feedback and comments. <3

Yeah? Maybe a black headband could work better??

The socks in my eyes could be thrown out lol But I guess in that one sense they should stay...Mene needs more socks lol

Your welcome and G'luck ^^

Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Hay Divine! Happy Valentine's, dear. : ) Thanks for all you do.

Awww thanks Muggles, you too..even though I'm late on it. Love the look of your avi By the way ^^ so cute XD

Originally Posted by JamesB14

don't rate me, sorry for posting, I lost my shoes and my avatar isn't complete D:

lol okay. Say When XD

Originally Posted by 'clockwork

@ Divine ~ Thanks very much for the rate and putting me on the first page. ^-^ I wish there was a white belt or something. The new belt makes it look kinda cluttered in a bad way. :[

Yeah, a white belt would be nice even if it were just a ting one lol It just throws it off because is silver/white not a white/white.

And your welcome ^^

Originally Posted by wish

divine divine!! I added some red to my avvy near the feet!

what do you think? ^^;;

It a start, just some gloves and a few other little things would help pull it all together. Gloves and maybe a handband?
Though I have to say I like your current avi very much, to bad the ties of the shoes weren't black. Its very cute but again you need some gloves ^^

Originally Posted by L. Lawliet

I'm back again. And if you could please, rate me? <333 I appreciate it.

Of course ^^ Welcome back XD

Something seems to be missing...The flow it right, head to toe and the colors flow all the way through the avi Maybe its the white hair thats throwing it off. Try a darker shade of white or maybe another color for the hair. Everything else is looking good and well thought out but I think it could be the hair thats throwing it off.

7/10, Try changing the hair color.

Originally Posted by Eserel

>D
RAIT DIS AVVEH.
I was thinking of getting the gold and red leg warmers.
But I don't have enough gold right now.

I think the leg warmers would be great on this avi and help bring the colors from the top to the bottom. I like to see some more color brought to the hat because as of right now it looks like your avi is being eaten by some black blog monster. Try adding some red gloves to being red there and maybe use red for the hair color instead of black to help un drown your avi in the sea of black blob-ness. I would loose the bandanna, its a different shade of black and doesn't match to well, maybe the neck tie could work better.

7/10, needs some work to tame the black blob but other than that its lookin' good and the colors flow all the way through the avi ^^

Originally Posted by Apocrypha

may I get a rate for my current avatar? :3

Sure thing ^^

Right way I'm going to say you need more black on top. Your head has no black and you need it there to keep the flow head to toe and the over all look of the avi balanced. Right now the eye is drawn to the black and not the top of your avi. Maybe some black cuffs to break up all the pink? Even the black face heart tattoo wold be a go idea to add.

7/10 right now its not ver balance with the blacks but everything else seems to flow nicely together. The white/red/pinks but the black seems to be a bit to random if you don't add it to the top of your avi.

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Originally Posted by [L

ove[H]ate]Will you rate me please?

Its alil plain...I would try adding maybe a black top and some gloves. There really isn't much for me to rate seeing how your avi is half dressed. I think adding some head items, gloves, and even a belt would be a good idea. Maybe something in the color rand of pink/black/white or gold seeing how those colors are already in your avi.

5/10, good start...just add more to it ^^

Originally Posted by JamesB14

Alright, I'm ready to be rated now :3 I'm sure you'll nitpick the shoes, and I'm working on changing them. Other then that though, would you mind giving me a rate and such?

Okay, glad to see your Ready ^^

Well for started I do like and the shoes are fine, though I like to see more red at the bottom to help balance out the colors in this avi. More silver on the top of the avi (head) would be a good idea, right now those colors are just on the belt and shoes but they need to brought up to the head to make the avi balanced. Maybe some gloves would help with that as well. The black seems to be over powering the avi, try easing up in so much black and just stick with 2 large black items instead of so many. Maybe lose the boa and add the black heart tattoo and some black/silver gloves?

7/10, the black is way to over powering on this avi. Try breaking it up and adding more red and silver to it.

Originally Posted by Nightgaunt

I'm not really in the running, but you've got a really good fashion sense. (Better than mine), so if you have time I'd like a review. I'm not used to being this...perky looking. I'm not sure about the boots either.

Well for starters the hat doesn't match anything nor do the boots and staff, but everything else seems to match. If you want to keep the staff, which I think you should. I love how the heart looks like its hanging from the staff, so cute ^^ I would add a black belt, lose the pants and boots, add orange shoes or stockings with cute black shoes,and maybe a black head piece to tie in the staff.

or if you want to keep it perky looking, loose the staff, hat and add hints of brown to the avi to tie in the shoes.

7/10 cute but not yet balanced with colors.

Originally Posted by Sakura_Madison

Thank you for the rating, Divine!

I would like a rating on this avatar:

Your welcome^^

I think a crown would be good on this avi, it would help draw all the golds of that shade together. SO far the flow is okay but not strong. The staff really doesn't go with this avi, there isn't any orange to tie it into the avi. Over all its simple but cute. Lacking on balance....

6/10 the lack of balance in colors makes it hard to rate. Theres plenty of gold but not in the same shades. I think a different pair of shoes could work better on this avi, maybe gold with ties? and a head item would be a good idea as well.

Wow!
This thread sure does get a lot of traffic.

May I have a rate, Divine?
^^

Originally Posted by nescia

Wow!
This thread sure does get a lot of traffic.

May I have a rate, Divine?
^^

Yeah it does, specially when I'm not here to keep up with it lol XD

Of course you may ^^

Right way my eye was drawn to the lower half of your avi to where all the purples are. I would try adding an purple arm band or maybe purple gloves. As for the head, I loose the crown and go for something that will really match the purple and make it pop against the red hair. Maybe a different hair style as well, that one is kinda blah, maybe something with length and waves or something without a bun. Also try adding the pink heart tattoo, I think it will being more to the face.

7/10 I love the lower half of your avi but the top half seems to loose all its fizzle and falls kinda flat.

I have purple witch gloves, but I didn't want to bring black into the avi.
I also had a purple t-shirt layered under the dress earlier and purple clips of chaos, but I felt like thy were too dark...
Maybe I'll put the t-shirt back on since the Artemis top isn't adding enough purple.

Thanks for the rate!
^^

EDIT-

I swapped the Artemis top for the t-shirt again.
^^

Divine| Thanks. : ) I'm glad you saw my post. I thought it'd get lost- you definitely needed a thank you. and yeah. I really like my avatar, too, I just can't figure out how to get red on the bottom. It doesn't really bother me though, i love the leg coolers with the flats. xD

<33

thank you very much! :3 <3