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12-15-2007, 09:14 PM
Welcome to the lovely Di's thread. :]
Sit back and relax, you'll be here for a while.
I write mostly open poetry about life and love. My favorite subjects.
Comments appreciated.
My poems are not yours to use. If you do, I'll catch you. This is your only warning.
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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12-15-2007, 09:19 PM
The swells of the ocean, waves going high enough to reach the
Tops of buildings, standing tall and proud in the concrete
Jungle, a sanctuary we're slowly
Losing, the buzzer sounds and it's 3 to 1 and the crowd
Cries out, unable to contain the fear
Inside, secrets hidden behind locked
Doors, and they're all open to
Me, a life with rhyme and reason, hate and love.
[ S.N.H, 2007
If you steal this, I'll get you ]
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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12-15-2007, 09:21 PM
Saw you in May
"Best Friends" you told me
They called your name during roll
Where were you?
I thought I heard you
I swear I saw you
Where were you?
[ S.N.H, 2007
If you steal this, I'll get you
For Chantz. ]
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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12-15-2007, 09:23 PM
Your heart beats
Faster
Faster
Faster
And you close your eyes
And he gets closer
And your heart beats
Faster
Faster
Faster
You press your lips to his
Unsure what to do
He takes the lead
And your heart beats
Faster
Faster
Faster
You stare into his eyes
And he squeezes your hand
We're the only ones in the world
And your heart beats
Faster
Faster
Faster
You're scared, he says
I'm new at this, you say
He smiles
And your heart beats
Faster
Faster
Faster
I kiss him again as my heart beats faster, faster, faster.
[ S.N.H, 2007
If you steal this, I'll get you ]
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12-18-2007, 03:29 AM
Smile for me, baby
The world's looking great
Smile for me, baby
The dark clouds are fay away
Push the thoughts away, the fears away
Smile for me, baby
Every thing's looking great
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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12-18-2007, 04:15 AM
The bell rings and I run out of class
Amid cries of "slow down" and "kiss my ass"
Winter break is in four days
Time's slowing down in a million ways
I'm going insane
Got too much on the brain
I miss my boyfriend
When is school gonna end
Tick tock, tick tock
Shut up, clock
The time, I could care less
Countdown to my next big mess
I know it's a crime
I really can't rhyme
This poem sucks
But that's just my luck
[ S.N.H, 2007 ]
Writer's Comments:
Just wrote down the first stuff that came to mind. Doesn't make a lot of sense and honestly, it's not supposed to.
I guess it's about school?
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12-19-2007, 01:28 AM
Leaning over my Spanish exam
A sudden revelation:
"No mas, no mas. No tiene sentido mas."
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fuyumi_saito
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12-19-2007, 03:36 AM
You're good. I think you could become a song writer. Songs are basically just poetry with music and singing after all.. and you could probably make some good ones ^^
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12-19-2007, 03:37 AM
( If you don't speak Spanish, that last part was, loosely translated, "No more, no more. Doesn't make sense anymore". )
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Originally Posted by fuyumi_saito
You're good. I think you could become a song writer. Songs are basically just poetry with music and singing after all.. and you could probably make some good ones ^^
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A comment! :o
Why thank you. x]
I have written songs before, but nothing great.
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Kiss me
I see in your eyes you wanna
Hold me
I'm kinda surprised that you
Love me
I can tell in the way you're looking
At me
And to reverse the rolls, I really
Want you
Can you see it in my eyes when you
Kiss me
Are you the one who's always thinking
Of me
I gotta ask, do you
Need me?
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12-20-2007, 02:23 AM
- Seal the deal with a cynical smile
Promises she'll stay for a while
A kiss to the lips and a stab to the heart
A lover's betrayal and a work of art
[ S.N.H 2007
Writer's Comments:
I like this?
No, I haven't been betrayed recently.
I miss my love, though. D; ]
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oHsoDemandinG
Cha-cha-cha.....Charmin!!
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12-22-2007, 11:41 PM
You are good. The spanish one was simple but I liked it alot. If you can grab people with only a few lines then you know you have talent :wink:. You have talent.
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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01-16-2008, 02:15 AM
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Originally Posted by oHsoDemandinG
You are good. The spanish one was simple but I liked it alot. If you can grab people with only a few lines then you know you have talent :wink:. You have talent.
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Oh why thank yew.
Lawl, I got computer banned by my mom. But I'm baaaaack!
IN ACTIOOON!
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01-18-2008, 01:12 PM
Hey, I see a light from here
Because the climb is only hardest going up
Going down is the easy part
Hey, life's the hardest when you're looking up from the bottom
Switch your perspective and look straight ahead
At me, you know?
You and me.
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Dihydrogen Monoxide
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03-06-2008, 07:53 PM
i'm the storybook hero
the monster in your dreams
the princess in the tower
the tales of make believe <3
[ A short thing for my AIM buddy info. ]
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