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Old 12-17-2007, 12:34 AM

So my friend drew a sketch,
She would like help pointing out mistakes fast !



Thankyou !

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Old 12-17-2007, 12:39 AM

Um it's okay, if it's a comic obviously you will color in and shade the woman better. But the person saying "wtf" will have less color and features in him so it doesn't confuse and distract the reader. (not in that way, perverts!) But anyways. It looks fine for a comic strip or something along those lines. Was your friends looking for anything other than that?

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Old 12-17-2007, 12:44 AM

Um it is actually a sketch, like a work in progresss.
She was going to let me clean up the lines and ofcourse color and shade.
She was looking for help with proportions and with things that looked out of place or odd [ she was going to the remove the wtf face by the way haha ]

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Old 12-17-2007, 01:06 AM

It seems very rough
To me the legs look a little strange...

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Old 12-17-2007, 01:14 AM

Legs? alright ! thanks. Um could you tell me how? are they uneven or one to big? o.o;;
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Old 12-17-2007, 02:27 AM

I don't think that the legs look too big.
If anything, they look too small in proportion to the stomach/torso area.

It's pretty cool though.
I hope that you post the finished version later.
I'd like to see how it turns out.
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Old 12-17-2007, 02:52 AM

The thighs need to be a big bigger to balance out the chest. That's the only thing I can think of, sorry >_< Maybe work on the chibi head a bit more.

 


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