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raynrayn
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12-19-2007, 04:27 AM
Hi!
Here's the link to my latest oekaki:
http://kupika.com/oekaki.php?id=f475f23bed4ba4czo98r
I'm relieved that I improved somewhat since my first oekaki in October 2007. ^^;;
People don't like using the dodge/burn tool and I sort of went overboard with it in this one...what do you think? :lol:
Thanks for viewing! ~later! :D
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Gush
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12-19-2007, 04:30 AM
Wow, that's really good!
But...
Can you refresh me on oekaki is?
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Dystopia
Bitter-Bitter
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12-19-2007, 04:36 AM
The eyes seem a little off, but it looks gorgeous otherwise. <3
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raynrayn
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12-19-2007, 04:42 AM
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Originally Posted by Gush
Wow, that's really good!
But...
Can you refresh me on oekaki is?
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Sure! Oekaki is the Japanese term for "doodle". Online there are a few of these oekaki programs that allow you to draw and color drawings! This is very convenient for people without photoshop or other expensive art softwares. :D
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raynrayn
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12-19-2007, 04:44 AM
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Originally Posted by the_anna135
The eyes seem a little off, but it looks gorgeous otherwise. <3
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:D Thank you! I'll be sure to keep at the "mirroring" check ups. I always forget to execute this when I sketch or do the lineart around the face. Thanks for the help!
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foggyday
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12-19-2007, 04:49 AM
the overboard is nice.XD
very bright and shiny
but as anna said..the eyes off
one wayy bigger then the other...O.o
and body wayy to small compared to the head..^^;;;
study the human proportions more nneh?^^
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Aeschylus
Sarcasm Machine
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12-19-2007, 05:00 AM
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Originally Posted by foggyday
the overboard is nice.XD
very bright and shiny
but as anna said..the eyes off
one wayy bigger then the other...O.o
and body wayy to small compared to the head..^^;;;
study the human proportions more nneh?^^
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Is that not a little harsh? The head is only a little off.
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Faye
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12-19-2007, 07:07 AM
Wow, really nice!
Yet, the eye on the right seems very awkward.
Over all, better than I can do. ^. ^;
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Fil
Dead Account Holder
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12-19-2007, 11:50 AM
No, seriously, the head is huge.
It makes for a more adorable picture, especially since you weren't going for the more realistic look, but the head is still huge.
Either that, or the shoulders need to be expanded and some other blahs.
It's easier to say that the head is a lot bigger than it's supposed to be, though. :3
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fuyumi_saito
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12-19-2007, 02:09 PM
Wow, it's very pretty. It looks like it's an old manga style, very cool ^^
I really like it. You're good..but I still don't get the meaning of oekaki
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Amiiu
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12-19-2007, 10:16 PM
Nice except the eyes seem to big for the head, and the head seems to big for the body. Also the left arm (our right) seems to bend strangely under the arm bracelet thing. Also maybe you should try drawing more individual strands of hair? I noticed you did a little, but there should be more. Love the shiny background though.
*o*
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orgasm
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12-26-2007, 06:57 PM
whoah. that look secksy! ;X i'm feeling the tone of colors you chose. i think the only two things that are a bit off is the eyes and how it overlaps into the hair and the headband.. how it doesn't look like it curves around the head. other than that it looks very good! keep it up. ;]
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MagicalShine
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12-26-2007, 07:22 PM
Very pretty and colorful :) I like how you made the whole painting such bright.
You may want to work on female body, though. Keep it up the good work^^
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suppi
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12-26-2007, 08:10 PM
That's really pretty. o: Great colors too. n-n Good job~ <3
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aonith
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12-26-2007, 11:50 PM
Whoa! It's sweet!
I love your style and thhe colors you used are so lovely. They fit image perfectly.
Keep up with the good work ^^
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