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Old 01-03-2008, 03:57 AM

I'm going to post some of my lyrics I've written, feel free to comment and critique them.

This is my favorite one:
~These Scars~
How do you heal wounds so deep
They can't be seen
They can't be healed
Hove you ever wondered how deep
Wounds run, why the scar appears
before the wound fully heals?
Maybe the scar is there to let others know
of the pain that lives down underneath(I might change that to down below--Tell me what you think of that change)

These scars are here for a purpose
These scars give warning
of what lies underneath
When you see these scars,
just remember there's a story behind them
These scars are living proof
of all the things I've been through.

These wounds only seem to get deeper
with each passing day
These scars never leave, never fade away
Have you ever wondered how long it takes
to heal these deep wounds, why
somethimes it feels like they never heal
Maybe the wound heals when no one's watching
when no one notices

These scars are here for a purpose
These scars give warning
of what lies underneath
When you see these scars,
just remember there's a story behind them
These scars are living proof
of all the things I've been through.

These scars are here to remind you
Just how fragile life can be
How much there's left to fight through

These scars are here for a purpose
These scars give warning
of what lies underneath
When you see these scars,
just remember there's a story behind them
These scars are living proof
of all the things I've been through.

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Old 01-03-2008, 08:54 PM

~Holding On~
Holding on is hard to do
with no one to listen
No one who gives a care
When no one believes you
What do you do?
Why hold on when no one notices
anything you're going through

When all you want
is someone who understands
And all you need
is someone to cry to
When nothing goes right
Everything's falling apart
All I want is someone to understand me
All I want is someone to trust
All I want is someone to believe
All I want is someone to care
All I want is someone to love

When everyone thinks you're faking
Nobody believes a word you say
No one's there the days you cry
Your pain starts showing through
Why hide all the things you go through?
Why hold on when everyone asks
why you are the way you are?

When all you want
is someone who understands
And all you need
is someone to cry to
When nothing goes right
Everything's falling apart
All I want is someone to understand me
All I want is someone to trust
All I want is someone to believe
All I want is someone to care
All I want is someone to love

When all you want
is someone who understands
And all you need
is someone to cry to
When nothing goes right
Everything's falling apart
All I want is someone to understand me

And I found it all in you
.

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Old 01-04-2008, 04:39 PM

~Walls~
I am my ouw worse enemy
doesn't even begin to describe me
I can't describe the way I am
I'm just me
I've been hurt so many times
by people I thought I could trust
Some promises are made to be broken

I don't know how to act
When people are around
I don't know what to say
When people talk to me
I look around and
can't believe they're talking to me
I'm always suspecious
Always over cautious
But that's just me.

I never thought I'd make it this far
I never thought I'd be here now
ruining all my chances of making friends
I put up so many walls
I don't know if anyone can tear them down
Everytime someone gets too close
More walls are put up.
before the old ones get torn down

I don't know how to act
When people are around
I don't know what to say
When people talk to me
I look around and
can't believe they're talking to me
I'm always suspecious
Always over cautious
But that's just me.

I don't know why I do these things
I guess I'm just scared
Scared of getting hurt again
But all I do is make things worse
All I do is hurt myself
I wish I could stop building these walls
I just want someone to tear them down
But everytime I get close...

I don't know how to act
When people are around
I don't know what to say
When people talk to me
I look around and
can't believe they're talking to me
I'm always suspecious
Always over cautious
But that's just me.

I'm telling you this
So you can break down these walls
And set me free
.

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Old 01-29-2008, 09:42 PM

~Trust Me~

Trust me
is what everyone says
but when you do
you only end up getting hurt again
I'm so sick of getting hurt
I don't trust anyone anymore
Some people say I'm over cautious
But I'm just protecting myself

So what if I cause
the situations I fear
At least I can deal with the ones I cause
But a life of trusting no one is lonesome
Just wishing I could figure out
Figure out just who to trust
I always seem to make the wrong choices

Trust me
is what everyone says
but when you do
you only end up getting hurt again
I'm so sick of getting hurt
I don't trust anyone anymore
Some people say I'm over cautious
But I'm just protecting myself

Whenever I start to trust
without fail, it makes me into a fool
I hate always turning out as the fool
I've tried to change the person I am
But everytime I do
I just become a bigger fool
It doesn't matter what I do

Trust me
is what everyone says
but when you do
you only end up getting hurt again
I'm so sick of getting hurt
I don't trust anyone anymore
Some people say I'm over cautious
But I'm just protecting myself

In this world how do you know
Know just who to trust?
When everyone's out to hurt you
Then who do you trust?
.

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Old 01-31-2008, 01:14 PM

~Fly Away~

Some days it's just too much
all I want is to leave
Go somewhere no one will find us
Somewhere we can just believe
Believing in ourselves and our love
Nothing's wrong with you by my side
As long as we're together we'll survive
I want to be the one to whom you confide
Where ever you go I'd be with you
What ever you do I'll support you

There's not a night I don't dream it (EDIT: Could also be--There's not a night I doubt it)
I want to fly away with you
All I want us to do is commit (EDIT: All I want to do with you is commit)
It doesn't matter what all we go through
I want to fly where no one can tell us
What to feel and how not to act(EDIT: how not to act -OR- what not to feel and what not to sense)

I want to fly high in the hills
Up past the mountains and clouds
I want to go down to the beach
Past all saneness and the crowds
I want to fly back down to earth
To tell everyone we were right
Then they'd see everything I see
They'd be able to see day's first light
They'd see our hope, our joy, our love
They'd see just how perfect we are together

There's not a night I don't dream it (EDIT: Could also be--There's not a night I doubt it)
I want to fly away with you
All I want us to do is to commit (EDIT: All I want to do with you is commit)
It doesn't matter what all we go through
I want to fly where no one can tell us
What to feel and how to act(EDIT: how not to act -OR- what not to feel and what not to sense)
.

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Old 02-10-2008, 07:56 PM

~Under the Surface~
Everynight I sit and wonder
what I'm doing wrong
Replaying every moment
Every little mistake I made
All the little things that went wrong
Just wondering how to make
all the mistakes right again
I wonder why I'm me
Because that's just who
I don't want to be

Crying myself to sleep everynight
but no one even notices
Silently screaming so no one hears me
No one ever knows what goes on
behind this masked face
What goes on... under the surface.

Everynight I sit and wonder
If anyone's just like me
always causing the worse
but always striving for the best
Everything I touch, I break
Everything I love, I hate
Just wished this all made sense
Wishing this all away
I wanna wake up from this dream
This living nightmare is more
More than I can ever take

Crying myself to sleep everynight
but no one even notices
Silently screaming so no one hears me
No one ever knows what goes on
behind this masked face
What goes on... under the surface.

This masked face looks
Well put together
smart and smooth
very calm and alright
but this mask is exactly that
so don't be fooled
This mask is the only thing
that keeps me from coming unglued
So now you really know
Just exactly what goes on
Behind this masked face
And under the surface.
.

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Old 02-11-2008, 09:57 PM

~One Thing~
Watch her face
As she falls from grace
Look and see
And say that person isn't me
Look at the sky
with all those chances passing by
Look up and say
I'm going to make it someday
Watch her face
As she falls from grace
Look and see
And say that person isn't me
Look at the sky
with all those chances passing by
Look up and say
I'm going to make it someday

Whatever it takes
No matter the mistakes
I know I'll be the one
The one that makes it one day.

Every touch brings me closer
Every breathe makes me weaker
Whenever I think about it...
I've even started to commit
Then reality pulls me back
I feel in my heart there's a crack
It just doesn't matter what I do
I just can't help falling for you.

Whatever it takes
No matter the mistakes
I know I'll be the one
The one that makes it one day.

I'll reach all my goals somehow
With or without you
Just remember these things I vow
One day all this will say adieu
All my life I've only wanted one thing

Whatever it takes
No matter the mistakes
I know I'll be the one
The one that makes it one day.

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Old 02-13-2008, 03:33 AM

~Second Chance~
So whatever happened
to my happily ever after
Whatever happened to
my beautiful happy ending
Why is everything falling apart
just as it starts to feel so right
Why is it always seem
like the world's upsidedown

What ever happened
To all those second chances
Where did they go?
I can't remember using them
Maybe they all just disappeared
Or maybe ther're hiding just ahead
Or maybe just around the bend

Why is it, just as we were getting close
that we always pull away
Why do we dodge each other
When all I want is to be close to you
Why do we pretend we don't know each other
When all we want is to know each other better
Why don't we say how we really feel
Is it besauce we're both to scared?

What ever happened
To all those second chances
Where did they go?
I can't remember using them
Maybe they all just disappeared
Or maybe ther're hiding just ahead
Or maybe just around the bend

I wish I could say everything
Tell you everything on my mind
But then reality always pulls me back

What ever happened
To all those second chances
Where did they go?
I can't remember using them
Maybe they all just disappeared
Or maybe they're hiding just ahead
Or maybe just around the bend

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Old 02-17-2008, 05:59 PM

A work in Progress:

I’m not anywhere near superwoman.
I’m just plain normal me.
But I’m letting you into my secret plan
I’m just hoping that you agree
When all I want is you
Only you can make that come true
Spending all my time dreaming
Then returning to reality
I come back with my face beaming
Wishing my dreams were an actuality
I just can’t seem keep myself contained
I just know I can see what could be obtained
I don’t understand why you keep denying

 


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