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Old 01-05-2008, 04:46 PM

I've decided to post some of my songs on here, I'm hoping y'all will comment! I'd be very greatful!

This song is called Fateful... I wrote it when I was finally sick of my ex...

Don’t try and mend my heart
You’ve already stuck the dagger in a million times
You lying seems to not make me cry anymore
My feelings for you can’t get higher no more
This has got to be the end
I’m sick and tried of this my friend
Please hear me when I say

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

No duct tape
No strength of glue
Will bring my heart back together
No words of comfort
No explanation
Could make me ever believe
That you’d never break my heart again
If I gave you another chance if it came
And if you came back to me
All I’ll be able to say is

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

Anger won’t get in the way
Your plea’s I’ll listen, but there’s no way
After all you’ve done
How I could possibly forget everything you’ve done to me

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return to them again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

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Old 01-05-2008, 04:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by devil moth
I've decided to post some of my songs on here, I'm hoping y'all will comment! I'd be very greatful!

This song is called Fateful... I wrote it when I was finally sick of my ex...

Don’t try and mend my heart
You’ve already stuck the dagger in a million times
You lying seems to not make me cry anymore
My feelings for you can’t get higher no more
This has got to be the end
I’m sick and tried of this my friend
Please hear me when I say

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

No duct tape
No strength of glue
Will bring my heart back together
No words of comfort
No explanation
Could make me ever believe
That you’d never break my heart again
If I gave you another chance if it came
And if you came back to me
All I’ll be able to say is

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

Anger won’t get in the way
Your plea’s I’ll listen, but there’s no way
After all you’ve done
How I could possibly forget everything you’ve done to me

“I have to turn my back on you
Leave all the memories
Say good-bye and never return to them again
I know I’ll never get to kiss you again
Show you how much I will love you till the end
I stay at a distance
Pray that you will always remain fateful to yourself”

This is another I have written- It's my personal favorite as the writer! Consquenses...

I keep on thinking
Are you really for me
Should I give up everything?
Just for a feeling
Should I tell you I love you?
Then live with the embarrassment
And I might then not even be able
To talk to you again

I could suffer
Give you up forever
Tell nobody else
What I am feeling inside for you
I could never bare
Looking at you
Being silent all the time
Something I could never do

What have these feelings done to me
Is this really the way I want to be
Should I set my feelings free
Tell you and get it over
Live with the consequences I know will arise
What have these feelings done to me
Is this really the way I want to see
My future of living in hibernation
Could I even live with the consequences (consequences)

Many times before
I’ve looked over at you
I couldn’t say anything
I told you the wrong words
Why is it all I think about is you
Only you
I said I could never love
Somebody who seems so cold hearted
Like you (Like you)

What have these feelings done to me
Is this really the way I want to be
Should I set my feelings free
Tell you and get it over
Live with the consequences I know will arise
What have these feelings done to me
Is this really the way I want to see
My future of living in hibernation
Could I even live with the consequences (consequences)

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Old 01-05-2008, 05:54 PM

We're not supposed to post song lyrics on Menewsha, but it sounds good.

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Old 01-05-2008, 05:57 PM

We aren't??? I must have overlooked that... ^^'

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Old 01-05-2008, 06:02 PM

Don't think so, it would make earning gold way too easy and it's pretty much spam if you ask me. X-x;

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Old 01-06-2008, 01:04 AM

Wow... Those are really amazing and deep and just wow. I admire your work...

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Old 01-06-2008, 10:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Arc
Don't think so, it would make earning gold way too easy and it's pretty much spam if you ask me. X-x;
It's only "not allowed" (meaning you have to quote it) when it's lyrics you didn't write yourself.
When you wrote the lyrics yourself, it's perfectly alright to post and ask for comments, like with short stories and drabbles and such.... ^^
It can be a little confusing tho, I imagine :)

@devil moth - really nice lyrics! But next time, don't quote your previous post, it just makes the page larger, harder to navigate within, and is overall just ennecessary unless you have something to say about it (which you can edit into the first post without difficulty.)

I definitely see a talent! have you added music to them?

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Old 01-07-2008, 02:44 PM

Yes, Dearest, I'm currently adding music to them...
@ everybody... thanks for your comments

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Old 01-08-2008, 11:10 PM

very nice work my friend

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Old 01-09-2008, 02:23 PM

Ack! You're a stalker triforcer100! LEAVE ME ALONE! -Sorry Kas, I had to freak... >.<-

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Old 01-15-2008, 12:51 AM

Here is another one! Uh... Angel in Reverse I think it is
People have told me enough times
The night seems to drive me crazy
The moonlight was like a drug to me
When my friend looked over
She said there was a look misconception
On my face
Like I had seen an angel

People have said I’m the kind to fall in love easily
Love seems to drive me crazy
When I looked into your eyes
The first time
I thought I must have been dreaming
Something so perfect couldn’t be real
You must have been imaginary

One day
Is all it takes
One day
I think I already love you
One day
And I think you’ve won my heart
I think I met an angel in reverse

Always felt like there was a separation from me and the world
Nobody was worth me looking into their eyes
I thought I’ve fallen in love before
But I’ve never really felt it
When I met you I felt so comfortable around you
I thought maybe you were the right one for me
But I know better than to believe that

One day
Is all it takes
One day
I think I already love you
One day
And I think you’ve won my heart
I think I met an angel in reverse

Angel in black
That’ll always be my first thought once your name is said
You seem so perfect in my eyes
Even thought nobody is perfect inside

One day
Is all it takes
One day
I think I already love you
One day
And I think you’ve won my heart
I think I met an angel in reverse

 


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