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#1
Old 01-21-2008, 02:29 AM

Well I felt like drawing one of my avatars from my many avatar forum sites. xD.
Here is the picture:



The one thing that irritates me about the picture is the mouth. (I should fix it. haha.) So, any critiques? I was thinking about making an art shop in Menewsha to earn some extra gold. (just remember it's a chibi. xD.)

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Old 01-21-2008, 02:30 AM

=D I like it.
The mouth seems to be a little too low, though. Raise it up and it should be fine.

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Old 01-21-2008, 02:32 AM

Haha. Thanks Dystopia.
I'll probably fix it later. ^_^.

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Old 01-21-2008, 02:37 AM

In my opinion, I can't find anything wrong with your chibi. X3~! You should definitely open up an art shop! 8DD

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Old 01-21-2008, 02:52 AM

Haha, thanks. I'll definitely consider.'
(Just have to do pricing and more examples. xD)

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Old 01-21-2008, 02:55 AM

O.o SO CUTEE!!!
haha, it's really good! and if you make an art shop, I would totally buy.
the mouth, well, it IS a bit low, and it's too wide. maybe if you drew her mouth closed, it would look a bit better, but overall, it's really cute!

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Old 01-21-2008, 03:01 AM

Very nice job.
I like how the little purple/pink butterfly print looks behind it, too.

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Old 01-21-2008, 03:07 AM

Woahh! That's one very cute art xD
I'd think making gold selling art like this should be easy x3

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Old 01-21-2008, 03:15 AM


That is really cool! <3333

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Old 01-21-2008, 03:36 PM

This one looks awesome. I really like your coloring. And yeah, avatar art is always awesome thing <3
Keep it up :'D

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Old 01-21-2008, 04:15 PM

@Jenn_heart: Thanks so much. I am probably going to fix the mouth before I open my shop since it does look really weird now. (makes it look creepy. haha.) Now I have to look for prices. xD.

@Nescia: Thanks. My friend told me to do something with the background since it was too white, so I added in the butterflies. I am glad that you like it. ^_^.

@Arie: Heehee. Thanks. I kind of need gold on here. (especially for a King's Crown.)

@Sir D. Lo: Thanks. <3

@Aonith: I'm glad to hear that you like the coloring. ^_^. I better make more samples for my shop. Thank you everyone.

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Old 01-29-2008, 02:20 PM

LOL eekk a gaia floating head XD *shrugs* I dont know i like the "creepy mouth" gives off a sence of style

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Old 01-30-2008, 08:33 PM

I really like the coloring style on the headshot and all the sparkly highlights and butterflies. ^^ I really like the swirly on the bangs, too, it's such a cute effect. Love the thick lineart, too. :D nice job.

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Old 02-01-2008, 07:11 AM

Its really good. It doesn't seem like a chibi, though. Most chibis have more rounded faces. But it's still really good.

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Old 02-01-2008, 06:13 PM

Other than the low mouth, I think it's really cute. Although it doesn't look too chibi, try making the chin more rounded like a little kid or something. =D

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#16
Old 02-01-2008, 07:02 PM

I like how you color. =3
I think it's good also, but as the others have pointed out, the mouth is indeed a bit low. other than that I like it.

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#17
Old 02-02-2008, 01:36 AM

very nice i like how you added the butterflis in the background it gives it alittle more colour

 


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