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Old 01-24-2008, 12:23 AM

It's just a poem I wrote during my spare time. I know it's not the best but I thought it sounded nice... but thats just me.

I was Sewn together wrong,
With my heart left undone.
What have I become
When I was sewn together wrong?


And a little fact for you is that this is actually a part of a song that I've written! If people like this one then I'll probably put my other poems on here!

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Old 01-24-2008, 12:45 AM


It's nice but...far too short to actually consistute as a full poem. It's barely bigger than a haiku and shorter than a limerick.

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Old 01-27-2008, 12:05 AM

I just do freeverse... I don't know why I only like doing those... I think its cause you don't have to follow any guidlines or such... I do have one that is actually printed in a book and won me the award for the best poem by an amateur poet in 2007. It's called Winter Frozen Heart...

Also, I'm not into those long poems and such... I just like them short enough to not fall asleep and long enough to understand me!

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Old 02-14-2008, 09:59 AM

You should post the whole song ^.^ It seems like part of a whole, as if it should be surrounded by other words and this is just the meat, the message of them, but maybe that's just me.

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Old 02-14-2008, 11:00 PM

yeah... I have to find the rest. :oops: I lost the paper that I wrote it on.. But! As soon as I find them I'll place it here!

 


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