So, I'm drawing my boyfriend a picture for Valentine's day. I know it goes against everything Hallmark believes in, but I think that something I spent three hours on has more sentiment than a card that I bought and just signed my name to. But enough background. XD

It's just a WIP (obviously), but I'd like a few crits on it before I go further with the line art. I'd particularly like it if his arm actually looked like it was attached to his body in a way that his bone structure can realistically allow. Ha.
I just noticed how weird the girl's head looks. It's been fixed, so ignore that. I'll re-upload the picture tomorrow.



Thank you in advance.

Honestly, I think its absolutely adorable. ><;
But I'm not much of an Art Critique...

I think the position looks awkward. But maybe it'll look better when you color it. XD

Maybe turn the girl on her side more? And bend the guy's leg more on the girl. Sink the girl's head in more since the guy's head is supposed to be over her, right?

Sorry if I sound vague or anything. Good luck with the picture, I hope your boyfriend will like it. :P