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Lynmai Amherst
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02-25-2008, 12:56 AM
http://runny-babbit.deviantart.com/a...-Long-77398708
I finally managed to draw something I kind of liked after about a month of art block. I know so far about her right leg being weird, I'm working on perspective now though. ^-^ As well as revising anatomy for artistic and my Beauty Therapy course. This is Lyn, my original character. What do you think of her? On first sight do you want to see more pictures of her? As you can tell, I like feedback on original characters. xD
If you do comment and don't get back to you soon-ish, I've probably gone to bed. Sorry! I will return to this thread, I promise.
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BlackCat
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02-25-2008, 01:58 AM
Very nice detailing. I love the tear in her stocking, and the tattoos are a nice touch. I enjoyed the contrast between the soft pallet you chose for her clothes and the royal red background. And those are really cool-looking boots.
However her eyes seem very glazed over and lifeless. The shading on her left forearm is a bit off; it looks like you put it on upside down. I also think her knuckles on that hand are down too low and are too close to her fingers.
Overall, that's a great picture and good job on getting out of your drawing funk! <3
(PS: The next time you have an issue with a picture, print it out and hold it up to a mirror. You'll be amazed at what a change in perspective will do for finding flaws in your work. ;x )
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Leona of the Zodiac
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02-25-2008, 05:07 AM
I have to say, I really like all of the detail that you put into your work. The outfit has all of these nifty little details, and the tats are quite fascinating.
Nice pose too, the only suggestion I would say is perhaps tweak the hands a bit more.
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fuyumi_saito
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02-25-2008, 09:12 PM
Wow..it's very good. I wish I was that good.. From an art perspective, I'd say work on hands a bit more..
You're way better than me ^^ But everyone still needs practice and hands are hard to draw.. you also need to work on your shadows coloring wise...that's it though. Otherwise it's really a 99.99/100
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Amiiu
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02-25-2008, 09:35 PM
Pretty good, and I like the color of the outfit.
Maybe it's just me, but it seems like the shoulders are a little to wide and the legs look a little short and kind of awkward. Also, the hands and eyes look kind of strange as well.
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