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Old 02-26-2008, 05:39 PM

Humanity~

She stands tall before the surface,
confident, informed, pure,
skin of silk and pearl,
hair of autumn leaves,
eyes of the sea after a storm.

The surfact stands tall before the girl,
wide as the love of a mother,
deep as the darkest nights,
clear as the dawn's air,
simple as a childs' curiosity.

The two sides stand apart,
neither moving nor speaking,
minutes, hours, days pass,
but there is no change,
they ponder each other's grace.

She stands tall before the surface,
confident, wise, learned,
skin of leather and sand,
hair of thunder and lightning,
eyes of the sea's youth.

The surfact stands tall before the woman,
wide as the love of a mother,
deep as the darkest nights,
clear as the dawn's air,
simple as a child's curiosity.

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Old 02-26-2008, 05:43 PM

But Never~

Never near but never far,
fighting as if we're in a war.
Never telling but never lies,
the tears come streaming from my eyes.
Never happy but never sad,
I'm too afraid to feel glad.
Never ending but never start,
I feel the breaking of my heart.
Never loving but never hate,
the issues never seem to wait.
Never living but never dead,
perhaps these things are in my head.
Never knowing but never known,
when will the love be shown.
Never hearing but never heard,
I'll die without a single word.
Never lonely but always alone,
with the problems from my home.

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Old 02-26-2008, 05:46 PM

Anger~

Hot tears stream down my face,
from all the yelling in this place.
Whimpers, sniffles, and then fear,
hoping that they will never hear.
Crumpled tissues overflow,
I have to let my feelings go.
Headache, anger, pen in hand,
writting feelings all unplanned.
Ink streams, anger grows,
the tears trickle down my nose.
Pen stops, paper tears,
so everyone will be unaware.
Tears stop, anger gone,
open the door, I am done.

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Old 02-28-2008, 02:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Fiery Griffin
Anger~

Hot tears stream down my face,
from all the yelling in this place.
Whimpers, sniffles, and then fear,
hoping that they will never hear.
Crumpled tissues overflow,
I have to let my feelings go.
Headache, anger, pen in hand,
writting feelings all unplanned.
Ink streams, anger grows,
the tears trickle down my nose.
Pen stops, paper tears,
so everyone will be unaware.
Tears stop, anger gone,
open the door, I am done.
I really liked this poem. I've felt like that before. so frusteradted and torn. not being able to think strait and just wanting to get away but you can't because you have too many responsibilities to take care of and no time for yourself. it sucks that's for damn sure but you've taken that and made something good out of it. PROPS!!!

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Old 02-29-2008, 04:37 PM

Thank you for that I have written a lot of things like this but simply haven't had the time to put them in here. I'm currently trying to bring some of my poems over from my gaian account.

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Old 02-29-2008, 04:41 PM

My Mirror and Me

I walk up to my mirror and look into its face,
hoping to see something new,
a future me from time and space.
Her will is strong and cheerful,
her lifes path is wide and clear,
there is absolutely nothing that this girl has got to fear.
And her beauty is completely flawless,
from both the outside and within,
but there is not a single trace of vanity,
not a single false tale she'd spin.

But in reality in that mirror,
it is the plain old me I see,
my path is full of clouds and fog,
that girl I saw is definately not me.
I fear the smallest things in life,
like failure and disgrace,
and there are very many troubled lines,
that stream across my face.
That girl that is within that mirror,
is the luckiest girl I know,
because if I was that girl in the mirror,
then my confidence would grow.

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Old 02-29-2008, 04:42 PM

Epilepsy

Does my flaw from birth annoy you,
I would change it if I could,
play with others the way you do,
and be the way you say I should.

It hurts me that you hate me,
only because you do not understand,
I wish I could explain it,
and try my hardest when I can.

But everytime I try to think,
my brain decides that it should stop,
and that is why I can't remember,
all of the things I thought.

So here I am again,
stuck in this time with you,
and it simply feels as if,
there is nothing I can do.

Some day I hope I will be better,
and then I'll make you understand,
and then maybe you will like me,
just the way I am.

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Old 02-29-2008, 04:43 PM

It's Not Easy Being Green.

There's nothing harder than being green,
trying to live in a world where no one cares.
People act as if you don't exsist,
degrading and dismembering you.

Until there is nothing left to survive,
then they will regret what they have done.
When they finally see,
it's not easy being green.

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Old 03-27-2008, 05:03 AM

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Your poetry has gotten SO much better, love. I rather liked the Epilepsy one.

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Old 03-29-2008, 01:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Fiery Griffin
But Never~

Never near but never far,
fighting as if we're in a war.
Never telling but never lies,
the tears come streaming from my eyes.
Never happy but never sad,
I'm too afraid to feel glad.
Never ending but never start,
I feel the breaking of my heart.
Never loving but never hate,
the issues never seem to wait.
Never living but never dead,
perhaps these things are in my head.
Never knowing but never known,
when will the love be shown.
Never hearing but never heard,
I'll die without a single word.
Never lonely but always alone,
with the problems from my home.
ooh i like this one especially the "never living but never dead" part. it just gives you this weird feeling, ya know

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Old 03-29-2008, 03:21 AM

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Humanity~

She stands tall before the surface,
confident, informed, pure,
skin of silk and pearl,
hair of autumn leaves,
eyes of the sea after a storm.

The surfact stands tall before the girl,
wide as the love of a mother,
deep as the darkest nights,
clear as the dawn's air,
simple as a childs' curiosity.

The two sides stand apart,
neither moving nor speaking,
minutes, hours, days pass,
but there is no change,
they ponder each other's grace.

She stands tall before the surface,
confident, wise, learned,
skin of leather and sand,
hair of thunder and lightning,
eyes of the sea's youth.

The surfact stands tall before the woman,
wide as the love of a mother,
deep as the darkest nights,
clear as the dawn's air,
simple as a child's curiosity.
Although I enjoyed all your poems, I liked this one the most.

 


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