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Old 03-02-2008, 04:00 PM

Okay, I wrote many poems/lyrics and I'm going to post them here. There's going to be one poem for each posts. I'll number each one so it'll make discussing them easier.

A lot of these poems are from last year, but some are from this year. I still like this guy and I'm lovesick for him, so a lot of this poetry is about loving him.

Poem1

Dark, hated nights
Shadows and the sights
Lovely disappearance
Sad interference

You took my hand
Walking along the sand
You said you loved me
I looked to your eyes to see
And I never saw the ugly truth
And this moment has never soothed
The time, when you said
You lied to me, you finally led
You led me on, you told my heart
You filled the cart
with hateful words
Roaring herds
And I don't love you
And I hope you knew!

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:04 PM

Poem2

There once was a girl who liked this guy
who wasn't at all shy.

Then things changed faster than ever
He said things that would change the future forever

He exclaimed that he liked another girl
so she said okay sure

She just sat down and sighed
But all she thought about made her cry

Throughout the next year
The thought of destruction came near

As feelings grew stronger
The thought lasted longer

The girl knew it was the end
And that she would never mend

She was up all night
And what a horrible sight

She took her blade
And she felt like she was to fade

She knew it was the end for everything
And all she ever wanted was just one thing...

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:08 PM

Poem3

And just one night
I was sitting in this lonely light

I shut the lights off
And I heard his voice whisper soft

I cried to the heavens
"Please make my one true love..."

And I stopped and thought
"he could never like a girl like me."

I cried till I got my one love out
And it ripped open my heart

I layed there in the heavens
And I looked down upon the one

The one that could never love me!

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:12 PM

Poem4

Why couldn't you just stay here
All day with me?

You can ruin my life, but you'll never know
all the fun I had without you there!

But still I cry,
Still I miss you,
Still I long for your voice,
Still I long for you!

And you will only laugh
And call me names
But I will wait there for you!

I dreamt of having you here
But you weren't even near

The light in this heart-filled eyes
crumbles and dies

I long for that sweet-sensation
that I have only found within you!

Like it or not, I'm love sick.

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:13 PM

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:14 PM

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:15 PM

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:16 PM

Thanks Manseutus! I wasn't ready for you to post, but that's okay. ^__^ You can post more now. I'm going to add more poems later. I need to find my notebook with the rest of them though. =/

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:49 PM

Not yet...some I'm going to put in later have titles, but I'm still thinking of titles for the rest of them.

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:53 PM

Sometimes naming poems just requires the simple tactic of stealing a line from it. Like 4 could be called Love sick. otr lonly without you. or alot of things.

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Old 03-02-2008, 04:58 PM

Yeah I know, I do that with my song lyrics. I just haven't gotten there yet. I will eventually though.

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Old 03-02-2008, 05:32 PM

I see. Well i hope some come to you soon. And i must say i disagree my poetry is not way better than yours. I like yours more than my own. :)

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Old 03-02-2008, 05:36 PM

How about ours are equal. ^___^

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Old 03-02-2008, 05:42 PM

Aye that i can agree to lass

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Old 03-03-2008, 02:38 AM

Yup. I'm thinking sometime this week I'll have more poems in here. You should come back and check it out. =]

 


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