here's a WIP I'm working on at the moment.
It's my OC Jack Edward MacGaven, a vampire as we speak.
He's just in for a sword dance!

just tell me what you think on this WIP, there may be some anatomical mistakes, I'd like to get rid of those, so red lines are appreciated.
version 1

I like how smooth your lines are - they're very nice :D This looks good so far - keep up the good work on it! You should post the finished product too <3

Nice thing is , every time I upload the picture, this one will change, so the end result will definitely be there, no worries.

That's pretty decent. I don't see any glaringly obvious anatomical mistakes, but under his left armpit (meaning our right) it looks a bit weird where it goes out to join the muscle. Maybe make the join smoother? I can't really think of how to fix it, but it looks a little strange. (That probably wasn't much help, but I thought I'd mention it. xDD;; )

I'd also kinda like to see more of a chin on him. >_> That's a matter of personal preference and style, I know, but he's a pretty built guy, and such a pointy chin looks a bit odd, to me at least.

But yeah, it's pretty nice. I hope what I said helped a little. xD;;

I can't see any major mistakes, although the eyes are slightly off somehow.

Did you, by any chance, post this on Roliana?

I think it looks pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

Thank you, every help is very welcome!

@giraffie: Yes I did post it on Roliana as well.
The more I post it on other places, the more comments and help I can get ^^

It's coming along nicely, but I think it looks sort of odd with the eyes closed, seeing as he's swinging a sword and all. Maybe try drawing in open eyes?

It's a swords dance, don't worry, He'll survive...
He's like a god with swords.

EDIT: the picture changed because I direct linked it from the Oekaki board I'm drawing it at.

Give me your new opinions please!