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Old 03-17-2008, 01:01 AM

So, I drew a chibi schoolgirl a while ago and I want to know what you guys think. I'm not professional, this is just a hobby right now, so don't expect TOO much, but this is my best artwork so far. :mrgreen: I hope you like it!

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:07 AM

Aww I love the eyes, I'd say work on the arms though.

What program do you use?

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:07 AM


The CGing is nice.
I have trouble with clean CGing. n__n;;

But... your proportions, quite honestly, are rather off.
For example, her arm(our left) is short and thicker than the one on the right, and the thumbs are indistinct from the rest of the hand.
Also, the hair seems kind of flat. hair tends to separate into smaller groups of strands than the ones you have drawn behind the arms.
I suggest checking some guides in deviantart or a similar site for help.

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:13 AM

It just looks okay, to be honest.

The left arm is bigger than the right arm.
The left eye is different from the right eye.
The right leg is crooked and a bit smaller than the left leg.

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:15 AM

The coloring was well done, but the actual drawing needs some work.
The eyes are uneven, as well as the mouth and head. Also, she has no ears at all and the hair seems very flat and the parts around the head [especially the top] seem stuck to the skin on her head. And it seems like either she has no hair in the middle of her back, or the hair is just a lot shorter at that area. Also, the arms and hands are different sizes, one is long, one is short, one is thick, one is thin, one is big, one is small. Also, the same goes with her legs. And although her eyes are colored in well, they seem blank.

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:18 AM

I agree that your coloring is very nice.
^^

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Old 03-17-2008, 01:22 AM

it's gorgeous! The arms and hands are a bit off, and her bangs could be lower, but I like it!

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Old 03-17-2008, 02:36 AM

  • I agree with everyone else.
    The coloring is great. but you still need alot of practice on the atonomy.Still, i like it. ♥

 


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