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Old 03-30-2008, 05:46 AM

what do you think about my art ??? this is some avi art for a different site and just art. but whats your opinion's, im just a beginner at this stuff so don't be so harsh, but then again if you crit telling me how to fix it be as harsh as you want! lol









i guess thats all ill post for now tell me what you think, thanks :D

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Old 03-30-2008, 06:04 AM

I would try not to blear you colors so much.

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Old 03-30-2008, 03:30 PM

You have a tendency to blur your lines. Try to make them more defined. This also goes for your shadows. Soft shadows are alright, but drawings also need harsher shadows for the sake of clarity and dynamics.

Also: try using a greater range of colors to make your drawings stand out with more life.

One last thing, try looking up some anatomy tutorials on deviantART (or MangaRevolution, whichever you prefer), your proportions need some work in some of these pics.

Remember to keep practicing! ^^ <3

 


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