I'm not a HUGE artist, but I enjoy drawing when I have the time...or when class gets really boring. XD I actually drew this while I was in my Ethics class...I know it's not that good or perfect but tell me what you think. I enjoy constructive criticism. Please don't just say, "DAWG this sucks!" If you think it sucks, please tell me why. So in the future I can improve on my style.

Also, keep in mind that I haven't drawn in a while so I am very rusty...and my scanner is crap lol.

I'm still deciding if I want to color it or not...sometimes if you don't have the right colors or you're having an off day coloring a picture can really screw it up. o.0

Oh! And I know she doesn't have another hand. XD I'm still working on finishing the drawing and I kept messing up that hand so I just decided to leave it off for now. lol

Anyways, here we go:

I think it is all around really cute. (:

the arm that is up with the butterfly is slightly shorter then the arm that goes down, you can tell because the elbows don't match up quite right. That is the only thing that I can see that needs fixing. But I love how you drew the hand. it looks so delicate! I wish my hands turned out as nice. <3

It feels like her neck up is too big for the body.
The shoulders in the picture just kind of seem to...slump?
Her body goes in too much and her arms are way too small [Thickness].
Also, her hands are small, and I don't think butterflies are THAT small.
Another thing is, the left [our right] arm, from the shoulder to the elbow, it kind of bends in an unnatural way.
And her neck to collarbone area is too long.
And, the lines on the leaves, or indents, they seem a bit much, I don't think leaves have that many on them...
And the leaf on the head looks unnatural, it looks like it's supposed to be falling off of her head instead of staying on top of it.
I do like the eyes and the details on the skirt though :]

I'm loving the hand that is there, the only thing is the thumb seems to disappear. Other than that the hand and arm look great.

Sorry about noticing the smaller things first, but it was the first thing I liked (considering I SUCK at drawing hands).
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I really like your detailing in this picture, truly the only thing that's really off is the anatomy. The shoulders don't quite line up right with the neck, and the torrso leading into the waist and hips looks a bit akward. Not bad for being rusty.

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*waves at you* : D

Oo~~ Prettyful. 8 D
I think the area between the neck and the collarbone is a bit too long though.

THank you all for the comments. :) I appreciate it. And i know I have issues with anatomy...I was darkening some lines and my sister (who is a pretty darn good drawer) came up behind me and she was like....this is wrong that looks too fat that is just strange...etc...lol so I know what you are all saying.

@Amiiu, I actually quite liked the hand. ^^ And yes, a butterfly/moth can be that small and leaves DO have many more lines than I even drew. But thank you for your comments.

In general I'm not very good at drawing hands I think this was just a fluke lol.

I really like it, I think the ears are really well done. I know that's a wierd thing to compliment on, but they always seem to be one of the harder things to draw.

It's very cute. ^^ I wonder how it look like colored..-thinks-