Avi art of my own avatar. comments and feedback muchly appreciated!

The first thing that jumps out at me is that the neck is much too thick for the head. Also, the area between the shoulders and upper breast isn't wide enough; the hair also looks more like a plastic hat than hair where it is hanging down. I like the way you have drawn the hand holding the rose - it looks pretty good! I always have trouble with hands myself. I also like the asymmetrical eyebrows - it gives a nice 'exCUSE me?' sort of expression tot he face.

thankies for your comment and i usually have trouble with hands too so that suprised me. But yes I thought that the neck was a bit iffy but what worried me the most was that I thought she looked a bit sort of leaning tower of pisa lol

As noted before, the neck is way too big, but also, your arms are very uneven and your fingers look, fake? I don't know it's kind of hard to describe, but also, the center of the body, as you go down, it gets smaller and smaller, what I mean is, I don't think the hips are wide enough. Also, the hands are too small, if you compare the size of your face and the size of your hand, it's not that big of a difference, but in this picture, there is quite a difference.

Her neck is massive, and her body gets too thin at the bottom - there are parts where her head's nearly as wide as her body, and that just doesn't seem natural (to me). Also, yeah, she definitely needs some more space between her shoulders and her chest.

Thankies ppl! I'm used to drawing faces so practiseing bodies and getting feedback is important to me. Thanks xx

if you're doing realism, her neck is actually fairly regular sized :?
but I would work on the hands and the arms. More the arms though.

They look really fake dont they...*sigh* oh well more and more practise! :D

yep. practice makes progress :3

Maybe the arm portion?
One side's kinda straight and the other isn't, I like the shading though :)

the neck is really thick and you should work on your body.

This is basically a repeat of my last comment about the neck and the head on my other post. Now I guess I can get a little deeper into critique. The body seems a bit scrunched if you know what I mean. The hips also seem a bit small compared to the torso. As for the arms, I think that if you lengthen out the chest and torso area the arms will seem more proportional. he fingers seem.... rubbery. If you add tiny bumps it gives the feeling that they actually have joints and ligaments. The hair also seems a bit rubbery. Don't be afraid to roughen it up a bit and give her loose hairs sticking out in random places. But unless you want her to look like a hobo don't go overboard! One last think that I noticed is the head seems a little crooked. I don't know if you were going for this effect or not but I just thought I would add it. Again work on anatomy and things like detail will soon become easier because you won't have to worry about whether things are going in the right place or not. Keep working at it! You will become a great artist and I'll be cheering for you the whole time. ^_6

awww your lovely! thankies i wont lie I've kinda given up on this one i had originally drawn it in pen so i cant fix it as easily but your comments will help me for future reference. :D