here's just a sketch of a commission before I pizazz it all up:






Is there anything that I need to fix?
And I realize that the lines are blotchy.
xD I was using a sharpie on thin paper.
When I redraw it on photoshop, the lines
will be much more crisp. lulz. But for
now, I just need to know if there's anything
I can do to fix the picture. Too much detail?
too little? help <3

It's really good!! The details are amazing however it looks as if the lines don't connect...perhaps that'd be a good thing to fix up. I have noticed from the bracelet to the arm--the arm doesn't show into the bracelet...if that makes sense. Overall, it's pretty much perfect.

I can't say anything. It's really good!

The lines look fine to me. I would agree with Cloud of Dawn about the unconnected lines. You should really try coloring it because the overall anatomy of the body looks great! ^^