This is the first page in a manga I'm thinking about drawing. It's still only in sketch phase so pay no mind to the messed up boxes and the randomly lighter lines cause those will be fixed in paint. I would like to know some problems you see with the whole setup and other things like that. Oh, and sorry if the image is to big but if I made it any smaller the text wouldn't be legible.

Another note: The woman sticking out behind the guy's head is a statue. =3

It looks pretty good! Are you going to shade it?

Originally Posted by Dystopia

It looks pretty good! Are you going to shade it?

yup once I fix a few things on the outline and get rid of all those annoying smudge marks! They make using paint to shade a lot harder... :?