Okay, it is kinda mature topic...
But I hope I won't break many rules T_T

This is my New OC from the World of Darkness roleplay game.
She is a werewolf, so that's why the smoke has a shape of the wolf.
Oh, and I'm planning to draw her a clover tatoo on her boob... but i=unsure... is it really needed? It is ust that her werewolf name is Lucky Fang and she is Irish.

Anyway, I need a tons of Feedback before coloring this silly picture!
Please, help me!
I don't know what to do with her hand, it looks horrible, though I don't know why. Maybe you have some ideas >.<
And what to do with the glasses? Leave them? Or move them on her head? I mean, like people often do with the sunglasses.
And how should I color it? Should i ink it first? Or just color with pencils?

Alright then, sorry for my English and stuff...

Damn, event though I edited many times, her neck still seems to be too long....

here is the DA link as well: http://aonith.deviantart.com/art/weed-82939214

A clover tattoo would indeed be awesome. Maybe even in wolf form there could be a clover branded on her brest or something...I don't know.

Umm...at first I thought the hand was reaching out to the wolf so it was kinda cool...

The earing kinda hide the fact that her neck is sorta long, but it looks great.

Depending on the shade of the glasses vs everything else she's wearing it might work.

This is just my opinion though... n_n

I think you draw a lovely profile. I like it a lot and all the details :3

just the hand might be a bit small compare to everything else. the ring and little fingers probably fold a bit too much that's why it looks rather odd? I would say to leave the glasses on because I LOVE them XD it adds a lot to character too.

@ PeachesDied:
Cool... I'm happy tha you like dmy idea. Now the only problem is is how to make it look cool. I think I'll use some new school style for it.

Thank you! Well, maybe because ot the earring itself the neck was done so long xD

@ mai:
Well I tried to look if the hand was small or not. You know, it shoul be the same sice as a face, but it came out even bigger. But now when I think of it, I guess that the problem is that it is to thon... maybe I should make it a bit wider? 0__o
But thank you for the fedback. ^__^

yes, I do know that. it might due to the position or angle of the hand that make it looks small. /shrugs

You're welcome! I'm eager to see the final outcome. <3

@ mai:
Yeah, maybe. I'll fix that :3

@ PeachesDied:
Sure. I'll post it as soon at it will be ready :3

Overall I think the picture is great. :) The smoke and glasses are fine. But you did mention something about the hand. I feel like it is a little out of place. And I also think that it's too small. The hand itself if drawn very well, but the proportions just seem a little bit off.

And what kind of tattoo were you thinking of putting on her boob? Did you say that it was the wolf? Because I personally think it looks great without a tattoo, but if you want to stick something there I'm sure it will be just as awesome. >.<

This drawing is so awesome, I love all the details~ @[email protected]

As for the hand, it looks like the wrist/arm is really small, but I can't tell if that's what you drew first or last. For the hand itself, you should probably be seeing more of the pinky side of the hand, all I did was look at my own hand and try to get it into that position. But I agree with Majinkoz that the hand looks a little out of place, I think it'd look good without it. =3

I think adding a clover tattoo would be a nice touch. ^ ^ And keep the glasses there, they're perfect! X3

@ Majinkoz:
Thank you very much! Yeas, now I realized that the han is jut too small for the body and this is what it makes look so odd and out of place.
And talking about a tattoo. Nope, it is not going to be a wolf or anything. I was planning to make a small tattooo of a clover, that's all :'D

@ Lura Crane:
Thank you very much for the lovely feedback.
I'll think about removin it, but wouldn't the picture look too empty that way?

You're very welcome. ^ ^

It might look a little empty, but I really like how she just stands without doing anything else but stare down the smoke-wolf. I noticed the smoke sort of faintly continues down in that area, so that might help a little. Otherwise, I guess it just makes a perfect spot for some text? >.<