warm breese


i awoke to a warmth not like the usual warmth. i rolled over and felt cold water at my side. i dug my face into the tiny grains of sand. i reached in front of me and felt a face. the jaw on the face was long and stern. the hair was soft and felt cool between my fingers.
"why have you taken me away from the hospital?are you going to hurt me?"

"i have no intention to harm you. i would never harm a blind woman. i thought you would like to spend the night with me on the beach hanna."
a cold chill ran down the beach that morning.

:boogie:

Uummmmm, I have to say I was expecting something a little longer but I've read short ones like this, so not to worry this is pretty good. Will you continue this story? I would really like to find out who the guy is and wonder what hanna was up to. I really don't have any critique except that when you write the story could it be possibly longer? I'm not trying to offend you but could you please make it longer the next time you write? Thanks!!!!

I like it!
You should write more.

So wait... this was posted a little while ago.
Anyone know what the writer plans to do?

It sounds kind of interesting.