
06-18-2008, 07:23 AM
There's a contridiction here that you could explore. The fact that the narrator figure is "floating in space" which implies emptiness, but it's "just us here together".
There's a possible direction with that. One could experiment with some one who is very much alone but pretending, through a poem that there's somewhere in this empty space. That's where I'd go anyway.
|