Story of a Girl

Dear Dairy:Last week I'd moved to Hugiwood.I was disappointed for some reason.I know it was a start of a new life but it was so sudden.But i lived with it.Well good night.Tomorrow is my first day of school.

I am Ella or as Emma.I love to read and makes correction,but i can't make choices.Well time for bed.I got into my pajama.It was warm and silky.I got lay my back on my fuffy bed.I started to think:Why are stuff so different i feel like i just been born.My mom Stella came in and said,"Sweetie light off by 30 more minutes."I reach for my book.I look for the file planned.I wrote in:Making my first day a normal day.I went into the bathroom and thought:Should i get a new look?I grabbed a comb and tried in look #1.It was all of my bangs of the left and put my hair down.(pretty cute)So i decided look #1.I went back to bed and rest my head on the soft pillow.It was morning around 6:00.I went to the bathroom and started putting toothpaste on my toothbrush.I gently gave it a push and it started working.I started to think:Having a life with the expectation of being cool is easy,but changing it so i can be normal is hard.Having rich mom and dad is hard.I did my hair.I went into my closet and putted on a denim skirt and a purple tank top.I went downstairs and ate breakfast.Next off was school.I had my butler drive me to school.The school seem very huge and i seem very small.I got out and went into the school door.It was so crowded.I bumped into a gothic girl .She said,"Hey watch where you are going."I said,"Sorry i didn't mean to."She pulled me over the less crowded area and said,"My name is Racheal you?"I answered,"Emma but you can called me Ella."I walked with her to my class.I was lucky i sat next to her.In front of me sat 5 girls.They look like a barbie doll.Next to them i saw a cute looking boy.The boy turned back and smiled at me.My heart was pounding,I thought i lost a beat.I smiled back.One of the girl looked back at me with a mean look.

NEXT ON STORY OF A GIRL,"Will Ella fit in?"

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