Hi Im Posion Love and I love to write stories! So here I will be posting My stories and chapters by everytime is a new story I will underline the title! Also if you want to you can edit them and rate them.

The Forbidden Rose

Chapter 1 The Start Of it all
"Hey Star! Whats up"asked Mark, stars BFF."Gas prices!" Star giggled. Star and Mark have been BFF since Kindergarten when Mark chased away Trenton the shool bully."Hey want to go to the icecream stand?"asked Mark." Sure" replied star. As The Two walked together Star started to blush. Star had a rush on Mark for over a year now and she couldn't help it because he was smart, cute, funny, strong,and athletic. At the same time Mark was feeling the same feelings but he was to shy to tell her his feelings because he thought they couldnt be anything more than friends. As they approached the Icecream stand Star noticed someting different about it. Mr.Rotex wasn't here instead there was a girl. Mark didnt notice it though he was to muc in thought to see anything different.

Wow!!! I cn't believe it your gonna do chapters to? sweet!!! Okay, I think the story is fabulous and I love the name of the book by the way. The only thing I have to say it don't abbreviate anything. Such as BFF write it out because I don't think very many people have things like that in their books. Just something to think about. So will youcontinue writing the rest of the story? I want to know what happens!!!!! So keep up the good work and keep me posted. I would like to have a good story to read every now and then.