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Old 07-18-2008, 04:31 PM

C&C much appreciated.

Full view on deviantART. :yes:


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Old 07-18-2008, 05:55 PM

o-o Holy Jeebus.

For some reason, the girl sticks out more than the rest of the piece, which makes it sort of seem like she was drawn then copy+pasted into the background. D8 Or is tha tjust me?

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Old 07-19-2008, 04:58 AM

Pretty damn awesome. I shall comment more fully on devart.

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Old 07-21-2008, 12:16 PM

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Pretty damn awesome. I shall comment more fully on devart.
Thanks, Penny! I got your input on dA and I gotta say that while I hadn't intended to work on this anymore (that snake killed me and I'm ready to be done with it @_@), I might actually take your suggestion and add some more detail to the girl's costume to make her fit in more with the detailed background.

Thanks again!

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Old 07-21-2008, 10:57 PM

Wow... just WOW!
I love your style and the whole idea of that picture!
You should really do a whole series, like different circus people. :3
I agree what Penny must of mentioned, with her having more detail to fit in with the detail of everything else.
The snake is just so amazingly done, it looks real!

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Old 07-21-2008, 11:32 PM

Oh my gosh June, that's awesome! The texture on the snake is fantastic, and I love the freakshow/circus look to it. :D

And I also :heart: pinups, so this is great. XD I feel like her extended leg is really long, but maybe it's just the toepoint.

Are you taking commissions? ;) XD

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Old 07-22-2008, 01:10 PM

This is just fabulous O.o The snake scale are so wonderful, I am amazed :) Her red tunique is probably what is making her standing out more but you don't need to work anymore on this pic. It's already brilliant !

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Old 07-22-2008, 05:53 PM

wow! damn girl you are good! i like this piece a lot... wow i dont even now what to say but DAMN!! haha
but yea very good i love it!

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Old 07-23-2008, 12:22 PM

@ Jali
Thanks! And I would totally like to do a series with this. That'd be pretty cool. :yes: And now that it's been mentioned a few times, I think I will add more detail to her corset. Lace and texture will do nicely, I think. ;)


@ Sizzla
I :heart: pinups too. ^_^
You might be right that her leg is a little long there. Legs are hard to do. D:
And unfortunately I'm not doing commissions right now, because I'm currently part of an art auction on Gaia and that's going to take my attention for now. Sorry.


@ GainaSpirit
Thanks! I worked for what seemed like an eternity on those friggin scales. @_@;


@ Maidens Solitair
haha Thanks! ^_^

Last edited by June; 07-23-2008 at 09:09 PM.. Reason: Forgot to answer Sizzla's question. xP

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Old 08-09-2008, 06:19 PM

That is amazing :3 I love it. The snake is very pretty.

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Old 08-09-2008, 07:35 PM

Yeah, the girl is much brighter than the rest of the picture, but I totally love it. o_o A suggestion would be just to tone down the colors a bit, maybe a more sultry dark hue? That way she fits more in the picture, but otherwise, this is gorgeous <3 I lovelovelove your anatomy, and the snake looks awesome. Great job <3

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#12
Old 08-09-2008, 08:44 PM

zomg amazing @_@ everyone has seem to already said what I wanted to say XD

 



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