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Old 09-26-2009, 02:33 PM


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Old 09-26-2009, 05:21 PM

You're really good at drawing, this is a beautiful piece!

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Old 09-26-2009, 08:07 PM

*o* I love her face, though, her legs seem a little awkward. The right leg looks like it needs to be out father, then being to close to the left.

Just a tip, sorry for my bad English. -_-

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Old 09-26-2009, 08:09 PM

Thats really quite good :)

Only thing I would suggest changing is the nose. It takes away from the look of the face and ruins the otherwise good look you have going on.

Also, the arms are far too thin. Perhaps try to make them thicker.

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Old 09-27-2009, 04:23 AM

Hoshi, that's beautiful! I love archery, so it is right up my alley ;)

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Old 09-28-2009, 05:18 PM

when I saw it I literally gasped, it's very very beautiful. I wish I could draw like you. What's your secret for drawing such proportionate bodies?

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Old 09-28-2009, 06:40 PM

beautiful work of art

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Old 09-28-2009, 09:32 PM

Well the arms compared to her body look a little thin....put some meat into that girl =D.Otherwise I really like the colouring :).Good job

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Old 10-25-2009, 10:13 PM

That is so AWESOME! i wish that i could draw like that! :)

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Old 11-02-2009, 09:15 PM

It has nice flow (lines aren't all stiff and angled) but the face seams a little off to me. I think its the kind of mouth you draw, to me it lacks depth. I don't draw manga style so I don't have much room to talk, It's good though.

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Old 11-03-2009, 08:32 PM

Oooo I quite like this. Despite what some are saying I really like the thickness of the arms, true they seem very thin but for some reason it seems to suit her. The neck however seems a bit off... probably get stoned but perhaps that is to thick? Or something... sorry I'm not much help.^^;

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Old 11-04-2009, 04:01 AM

WOW that is really Beautiful. I love drawing. But I wish my drawings would turn out like that when i draw people.

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Old 11-08-2009, 01:01 AM

I love it! That's because it reminds me of a book I'm obsessed with. The Hunger Games. She reminds me of Katniss just with a little shorter hair.

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Old 11-13-2009, 07:08 PM

This is very nice. I really like the face, especially the eyes. The arms seem a little too thin, though. I'd beef up the upper arms. I'm not saying make her obese or to give her rippling muscles, but it's looks like it's the same thickness as the lower part of her arm.

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Old 11-14-2009, 12:15 AM

this is really good!its..like..real anime!!! :D

 


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