
06-18-2010, 06:27 PM
THis is a song I wrote for English class, it's still a little rough, but I just wanted feed back =)
Her
Chorus: When I got him I thanked the stars
But every time I see him look at her I sob to the heavens
Your hands are dry, while mine are sweating nervously
When we're flesh to flesh, where are the goosebumps like I get?
Sometimes I get the feeling you wish I'd leave and magically come back her
These sad brown eyes wont ever be the blue of hers
And my dark hair will never turn to the blonde he wants
This broken body wont shed those unwanted pounds
Chorus x2
Why must you look at her like I want you to look at me?
Why must you love her, like I love you?
Chorus
Why can't I be loved?
Why can't I get the look you give her, from just anyone?
Chorus
Why must I love the already in love, instead of being apart of the loved
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