The wind whips around me
wispering in my ear
" what have you done child, oh what have you done?"
As i look around the only sound that reaches me
is the pounding of my hear in my hears
As i look down to my hands soaked in blood
To the sword at my feet
Glisning in the moon light
As images flash through my mind
of a great fight- for love and for land
Even now her blue eyes haunt me
her skin as pale as the moon
My Dark haird Raven
Of what have i done?

I gave up everything to be with you
he gave me his word

No harm woudl come to you
But as i return from battle
Hoping for you to greet me at the door
Insted i find you on the floor
No light shining in your eyes

My world turn to red
As i pick up my sword and flee
I shall get my vengeance!
I shall take the life of he who took yours
He who broke his word to me

With a Crash and a Bang
I entered his hall
Demanding his head
Or Die trying i would

The battle raged on till the last candle blew out
I have lost my love, my life
The blood on my hands is my own
As the wind whispers to me i crawl to you
My dark haired Raven

Only in death can we be together
Only now...
Can i have you as mine
My dark hair beauty

My Raven.

I really like this poem. Its very.. different to other poems. Very creative :)

The connotations of your title immediately set a mood and almost a setting for you poem. Whether you did this intentionally or if it was an accident -- I like that about it.

A well-meant tip I give you is to be careful about your spelling/capitalization, especially in poetry. With poetry, then, a poet sometimes means to leave a grammatical rule on the wayside, or they mean to forget to capitalize a certain word to give something more emphasis or style. If you mean it to have regular grammar and capitalization, you should pay attention to this as it make the poem easier to read.
Such as in line 5:

Originally Posted by Killercupcake

is the pounding of my hear in my hears

It takes away from the continuous rhythm of first reading the poem when I have to stop and figure out what you are saying in this line, wondering if "hears" is a noun I have not heard of and deciding whether you meant "ear" or "heart."

I love the almost medieval-romantic tone of this. I also like the shortness of the second stanza. It really brings out the second line in that stanza. ~
In the third stanza, you bring in two rhyming lines. I'm really starting to like your rhythm.

Originally Posted by Killercupcake

I shall get my vengeance!

My favourite line thus far. [If you can't tell, I'm writing review as I read it over for the first time.] I can practically hear you saying this, especially with the punctuation.

I like how you bring the whispering wind back from the first two lines, to after the battle scene. One last thing: initially when you said "he" in the poem, I was slightly confused, but everything resolved very well by the end. Bravo.

I hope this review was helpful to you. c: