Avendesora
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07-31-2009, 06:57 PM
So, a haiku is built of 3 lines. The first with 5 syllables, the second with 7 syllables and the third with 5 syllables. For example:
This is a Haiku
Which is about something nice;
It's about Haiku's
Lol, not the best in the world, but I hope you get the idea. :sweat:
Can you make a Haiku?
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Shtona
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07-31-2009, 11:03 PM
In the very end,
while everything will fail,
Love will continue.
Cheesy, I know, but it was sudden...
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X---AznCo0ki3
(。´∀`)/ Pets...
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07-31-2009, 11:07 PM
[[ I thought haiku was mostly about nature ? ]]
Love is a river
Flowing so peacefully
Falling so gently.
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Shtona
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07-31-2009, 11:21 PM
It usually is, but a lot of people choose to ignore that. Japanes haiku is usually strictly about nature though...
Pizza, how you can,
nourish and feed the masses,
with your cheesy feast!
Just got some pizza ^_^
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Avendesora
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08-05-2009, 12:24 PM
Hmm... something with nature...
I am fading soon.
And I'll never see the sky,
while spring is in bloom.
I don't know if you can even say that, but it was the most nature-ish I could think of. :b
EDIT: Just found a haiku poem i wrote a couple of weeks ago. It made sense when I wrote it, but I don't really know what it's supposed to mean now. XD
You keep on falling
Amid the dark of the night
And you see no end
And you hear the screams
Of the lost and the broken
But why wont it end?
And you feel the sorrow
Which your heart has awakened
It will never mend
And you'll feel the pain
Forever, within these chains
'Cause you can't break free
When you give up hope
There is a prospect of light
You must learn to see
We can choose to live
And we can decide to die
It is called 'to be'
Last edited by Avendesora; 08-05-2009 at 08:24 PM..
Reason: Editing for errors
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Shtona
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08-05-2009, 06:50 PM
@Avendesora: Thought I'd point this out. The first line of the first haiku in your last post was only four syllables. You'd have to write it: "I am fading soon..." I really like the poem built of haikus. I like the pattern it took, and the rhyming with the last word of each individual haiku. Well done...
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Avendesora
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08-05-2009, 08:23 PM
Thanks. ^^ Oh, and your right. It's supposed to say I am. :b
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Laurine
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08-08-2009, 10:12 PM
He is my best friend
He's got a tail and four legs
He's my dog Rollie
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