08-22-2009, 09:45 PM
Allright. I've got this story set up, mind you, it's still developing, but I don't want to continue unless it's really something that was worth all the work put into it.
The story, (As of now, it hasn't a title,) goes a little like this.
We're following Romulus, the hero of the story, through 7 diffrent worlds only to find he belongs in none of them. He tries again and again to find his profession, love, and a real family, but he gets nowere. In vain he tries again and again, but when he goes to the seventh world, or alternate dimension, he finds a temple and prays in it, to find himself confronted with his father. His father sends him a message that he knew even before his journey; that he would fail, he belonged nowhere. Obvoiusly, Romulus was not so happy to hear it confirmed. But Demetri continues, telling him he must create his own world. That he must finish the puzzle of the seven worlds by making a new piece to fill the void of the world that once was. The world, was named 'Earth', but after millions of years of existing, it ceased to be, now, all that is there is a void. Romulus travels here, but is not entirely sure how to create a dimension. Since the species of humans adapted, Romulus drifted. He slept there, and dreamed of the world he wanted. Gray skies, green rolling hills, and upon awakening, the hills were there. But not the sky. He concentrated on the vision of his dreams, and sure enough, the sky began to come together as if watching glass break in reverse. Romulus brings others like him to this newfound land, and after his leaving, he is condemned and banned from other dimensions by accusedly playing 'God'. All who entered the world were also banned, but few cared. A new life awaits.
So? Any good? See any changes needing to be made? I'm working on the tavelling, as well as the 'others', and creating the other seven dimensions. There will be eight stories all together to make one. Each depicting his travels (Or creation), of each dimension.
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