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FALLEN ROSE
Five years ago my boy friend David was killed by my psyco ex who died as well. I have not loved any other man since that sorrowful day, because I believed that David was my true love. Now I don't think I can love again because after his death, my heart become numb and frozen and it has been that way ever since. Today July 15, 2006 is the anniversary of his death.



On the cloudiest day of the year my eyes filled with sorrow for the one I lost five years ago. There he seemed to be standing a yard or two before me. My heart tightened in my chest, and warm, hot tears began to stream down my face. Breathless at the sight of him standing there. He turned around and stared at me with caring eyes.

"Hello Amber my love. It's been a long time I really missed you." He said in a soft loving voice. I looked at him for a minute then I turned towards the bridge and started to walk away when David grabbed my arm with his big, ice cold hands.

"Wait, Amber, please just... just wait please." He pleaded

"I thought you were dead I-I saw Mike kill you."

"He did."

"Then how are you alive?"

"I'm n... I'm not." He said, disgusted with himself.

"What?" I said with hysteria in my voice.

"I'm dead, yet I'm not."

"Let me go I want to go home. LET ME GO!" After I said it with fear in my voice he looked down in to my teary eyes with his sad light blue eye's then dropped his semi muscular arms to his side. At that second I ran off the bridge into the main streets. I felt like I was being followed so I ran faster and faster till I was at full speed to my house. When I got to the porch I yanked the keys out of my back pocket and opened the door. I went inside closed and locked the door.

I took my shoes off then walked to the couch. I grabbed the remote off the coffee table and lay down on the black leather couch. I turned on the T.V to the news. After awhile I nodded off. I started dreaming in this dream I'm screaming.

"NO! DON'T GO! DON'T LEAVE ME! DON'T DIE DAVID! PLEASE DON'T DIE!"

I woke up in a cold sweat. I sat up and a second later the door bell rings. I get up off the couch turn off the T.V and run to the door. I unlock and open the door to see David, standing there, holding a dozen red roses.

"Leave me alone David you broke my heart once I don’t want you to break it again.” I said, all the while tears filled eyes once again.

"I didn't mean to break your heart I meant to protect it."

"How can someone protect something they know was too fragile to protect in the first place?"

"I didn't know your heart would be broken by me." He said with a sad sigh. "May I come in?" He asked in a low voice.

I thought for a second then said "Sure." In a dark voice.

He wasn't even half way through the door when I slammed it in his face.

"Owe! What was that for?!" He asked in pain.

"Ha ha." I said as I relocked the door. I looked at my watch then ran up stairs to my room and grabbed my work clothes, went to the bath room, turned on the shower, got undressed, and then got in. When I was done I got out and got dressed. I went down stairs to the kitchen and made myself a turkey sandwich. When I finished eating I cleaned up my mess and went back in to the living room too put my shoes back on. I walked to the door and unlocked it, went outside, and locked it again.

I turned around to see David still standing there with a gloomy look on his face. I ignored him and walked to the bus stop. He was right behind me. The bus came six minutes later than usual. When I got on the bus driver said "Hi" and I nodded my head. David was still behind me. To distract myself I took out my mp3 and turned it on full blast. The song was Sinner by Drowning Pool. I looked up at David once and he was sitting across from me and he just stared at me. When the bus stopped three stops away from my work place I got off and of course David followed just as I knew he would. I tried to lose him around the corner and with success I did.

When I got to work I went to the back to check in and get my apron. Afterwards I went out in to the dining room to welcome the new guest entering the restaurant.
"Hello welcome to the midnight oasis...." then I noticed who was there, "David what are you doing here? I thought I got rid of you on my way here." I said disappointed with myself.
"No I was right behind you the whole time Amber I just let you get far ahead of me." He said with a smug grin that reached ear to ear.
"Oh bull I lost you back there and you know it!"
"No I fooled you into thinking that you lost me it was nothing more than a trick for the mind."
"Whatever. What do you want? And why are you following me?" I asked while trying to cool my head.
"I just want to be near you... its been along time since we last were together you know that and you know that I still love you with my heart and soul." He said in a warm voice.
"And you think I still have mutual feelings for you, right?" I said in a cold chilling voice that made David freeze.
"You-you don't love me anymore w-why what did I do to make you hate me so?" He questioned me.
"I don't know... I can't love anymore, and its all your fault." I mumbled as I started to cry.
"How-how can I make you love me again. Tell me and I shall make it happen.... just tell me." He said with hysteria taking over his voice.
"Can you turn back time and stop your own death, stop my pain can you do that David?"
"No I can't..."
"Then you can't do anything for me David you just can't." I said as I turned my back to him and walked away.
"Amber..." he said then walked out the door