Gabriel looked up and saw Dia 'hello there" he said in a nice tone.

'Hello, gabe the other angel said?' I said in a matching nice tone, looking down at him from over my tree.

Kiyoshi sits on a rock nearby everyone talking. He has his head down thinking about what he had done to his father and about his anger towards every other angel.

her memory might be gone she feels something she goes somewhere "they is a fallen angel i want to see"

He hears footsteps coming near, and raises his head. His eyes suddenly started to glow yellow. "Hmm...someone...is near..." He listens to the footsteps and realized that those footsteps sounded very smooth and ressembled an angel's feet.

she is not angel anymore she is human "a fallen angel that is hiding from us of killing something sad"

Gabriel quickly garbbed his knives. "where is he?!?! If he's dangerous or looks the wrong way at one of us he's gonna get a knife in his belly." Gabriel began to walk to the nearst shadow.

Kiyoshi looks at Gabriel holding the knives in his hand. "Are you here to kill me? If you are then let me ask you this one question before I die.......Did......God send you?"

My Character
Sho-kief "Kief" Matthew
age 17 he as been an angel for 200 year
bio: he has been a angel for 200 years
history: As a teen Kief was a hothead who never really cared for anything only lived for the moment, but when he sacrificed his life for a little girl he was redeemed and got his angel wings.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y70...ywithwings.jpg
what he looks like above

''Me wo samase.'' (open your eyes) Dia said, quite ironical if you think about it, having felt the visitor long ago.