bloodstainedwings
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03-18-2011, 01:12 PM
i personally feel it is a little too busy with all the background items and the hand held items. there doesnt seem to be any flow to it and over all it just does work for me. i think if you simplified the background you would also need to balance your outfit more. I think its just a little too random for me... possibly a lot too random for me. sorry.
if you want advice on how to fix that.. well i would say pick a theme and then pick a colour combination and work to have balance and flow from there with the items used.
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McNugget
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03-18-2011, 01:35 PM
9.1/10 Very nice Irish theme you got there. You even did a nice job coordinating all of tyhat green, and the tiny bits of gold give it a nice touch.:yes:
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03-18-2011, 02:21 PM
uske ur on FIRE
NU NU I MUST PUT U OUT!
i always love ur avis always so differnt
9-10
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Kenome-Chan
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03-18-2011, 03:48 PM
You have no hair...
-facepalm at noticing the obvious-
But it does look cool....
i think you need something on your head though...
but that's just me.
9/10
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chronic_heartbreak14
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03-18-2011, 08:36 PM
very pretty, the ears and tail seem a little random, but i think you're going for theme rather than matching... she looks like a bookworm with the glasses, and the belly tattoo makes her look like a bad girl... i think the white and pink of the ears and tail are just really random for me, so i'll give this a 7/10. it is a nice avatar, though duo-toned, but it could use another color to make it pop.
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McNugget
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03-18-2011, 11:02 PM
8.5/10 It's very well balanced in colour and I like the midnight-ish feel to it.
But the white on your hair distracts me a bit too much. Maybe try using blue or purple as a second colour to your hair to try and even it out?
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03-19-2011, 01:03 AM
10/10
I love this avi and the colors :}
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chronic_heartbreak14
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03-19-2011, 02:45 AM
i think you should ditch the cotton candy, its too much pirple right there. and darken the hair just a tad. you could alternatively keep the cotton candy if you lose the leggings and replace them with the new grape socks. i'll give this a 7/10
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Hayzel
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03-19-2011, 04:10 AM
It seems like there are too many colors. You've got pink, 2-3 shades of blue, white, and gold. It's well balanced but the white hair bothers me and so does the pink. I love the gold with the dark blue though.
6.5/10
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Knerd
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03-19-2011, 04:27 AM
Nice use of the Hissi skin, there! The colors are all very different, but your theme of flowers and petals helps them fit together really nicely. :yes:
I'd just recommend adding some more little accessories to flesh out your avatar's look. Some gloves, jewelry, belt, or another hairpin could make you look a bit more finished. 7/10
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03-19-2011, 05:35 AM
the blue on you just sticks out so much against the brown and green and i love it! i don't know if it's the sky background or the tree or the little brown cow, but the blue pops like whoa! and i like it!! :yes: it's complete without being cluttered and i can see a sort of story emerge... like you are a fairy cow thief and you just pluck the cows right off the field... after you shrink them of course ;) great job! i don't really have any criticisms other then the little pink leaves on the tree, but even that is charming cause it makes it seem more real life :yes: 9.5/10
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Murasaki Fujiwara
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03-19-2011, 07:17 AM
9/10
I love the colors. I know how hard it is to get the hair to match sometimes, and it looks great with your corset and other accouterments. You have a lovely spacey sort of theme and it's just so adorable and unusual. I feel like theres a little bit of something missing, like gloves or something of the sort.
But lovely! I applaud you!
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03-20-2011, 10:08 AM
I tihnk that I would like this avi a lot more if it was made in december. But as spring is on it's way and we are all looking forewardto more sun etc, this avatar seems very out of context. I love the skirt layering and the wya it matches with the hood, that can be quite awkward to match. However I'm not such a fan on the featured cape, I think it it soo sharp for the smooth lines of the other items on your avi. Also the starry hair pin really stands out and I don't think you need it. I like your hair colour, it ties in well with your background - same as with your eyes. However I dislike the red lips I think your avi would look far more serene if you used white lips. c: 5/10
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McNugget
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03-20-2011, 12:21 PM
9.5/10 Nice balance of colours.You did a really good job with that outfit.East, your avatars are always one of the best I always see on here. :yes:
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Eastriel
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03-20-2011, 03:52 PM
Aww thanyyou so much! From what I can see of your avi the body work is pretty good, you're really getting better, however i;d get rid of the flames I really think you don't need them c: 7/10
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03-20-2011, 10:35 PM
Aww, I like Usuke's flames :)
Easty: The colors work well together, and it's cute - but I don't see the point of the puddle :P Also... It's high time you make a new avi, woman! 6.5/10
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03-20-2011, 10:39 PM
I really like the gold and white together. You have balanced it out beautifully together, but I think you should tweak the hair colour to make it a bit more golden, and if you have the bigger crescent moon then I suggest using that because I think it would make the scenery look a bit more full! Other than that it is a beautiful avatar. 9.4/10
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03-21-2011, 07:56 AM
lol rox the puddle is there to match the hair and also as it was made the end of winter when the snow was melting. c:
pshhh i'll stay as I am for now, NO PEER PRESSURE :D
Haha cookie it's so cute! i'd add one of those rainbow hairpins though to match with the scarf! I like it though! 7/10
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bloodstainedwings
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03-21-2011, 02:19 PM
9/10
your outfit matches and it perfectly balanced but the puddle just doesnt make sense, maybe if you added rain in the background and one of those cute white and pink umbrellas it would make more sense to me.
other then that its perfect as usual.
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03-21-2011, 07:12 PM
I love the colours together! That read with that brown is awesome. I'm not too sure if that lime green really matches or not but it does make the avatar interesting. As always, the balance is done well and the avatar overall looks great! 8/10
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NiaMaggie
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03-21-2011, 08:12 PM
8.5/10
I love that you have combine so many colors and elements. However, I do think it is a little bit busy for my tastes.
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03-21-2011, 11:25 PM
I think if you ditched the scepter then it wouldn't feel so... red. and the white/silver on it is just there, where its nothing but an accent color anywhere else. because of that, i'll give you an 8/10
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McNugget
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03-22-2011, 12:48 AM
8/10 nicely done. I like the colours you used, and it's pretty well balanced. But the bareness of your shoulders bothers me a bit. Perhaps find a way to add some white there? And maybe get your eyes a darker blue if possible?
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Kenome-Chan
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03-22-2011, 02:33 PM
9.5/10
its the fire, it throws me off.
but the rest of it is amazing.
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Ace Strife
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03-22-2011, 08:36 PM
7/10 the tail and ears just look randomly put in there, need to do some layering to make the outfit look more compelte ^_^ it would turn out amazing if it put correctly
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