Ello fellow menew fellas! I am demon_angel_morbid also known as DAM or angel
I also go on gaiaonline.com as the same name ^.^
The reason for this forum is exactly what the title says, "Share YOUR music, poems and/or stories and get them rated.
The Rating it from 1 to 10
1 being the lamest and 10 being the most epic.
When you go to rate do it like this: (your rating)/10, simple right? I assume most of you would do that anyways.
REMINDER:
PLEASE BE NICE!! Even if the lyrics, stories and/or poems are bad in YOUR opinion, it doesn't give you the right to be rude about it. BUT if you are criticizing in a GOOD way then that is okay just remember to point out some good points as well, balance it out a bit.
Me personally I can take harsh criticizing IF it is constructive and not just saying it sucks and have no reasoning behind it ya know? I also can be pretty harsh with my criticizing, that is just how I am. I don't sugar coat my response or anything, BUT I am trying to be a little bit nice with my responses. Not only do I point out something that I feel needs work or something like that, I give a compliment as well on something that I thought was really done well.
One last thing following the rules of ToS and the reminder up above and we will get along very smoothly ;)
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Now Let me be the first to post some of my lyrics
~Downsid3 Up!~
By: Desolate Cry
8/25/10
Why must I feel this way
Why must I be down
I just want to fade
Craving the attention
That I don't have
Depriving me of my sensation
You turned out to be
So Cold!
SO Cold!
I can't believe
How you had sold
That stupid joke
Chorus:
But I turned the
Downsid3 Up!
But I turned the
Downsid3 Up!
But you had
Thrown me into the dirt
When you laugh
And when you flirt
With those sluty girls
But
When
I
Dream
I
See
You
With me______
So you and I had fell
Why do I tear up
And beat myself to Hell!
Over the likes of you
They say to me
That you are so perfect
I just have to laugh
Wait till they see what a reject
You truely are
I felt it and you didn't know
You are the biggest loser so far
And yet
This loser had hurt me
(Chorus 2x)
Tell me where our time went
When I am losing hope
Tell me if it was well spent
But somethings are never known
And I have to let
Go
I'm better off without you
Tell me why you had to be so low
When I was loving you
I will never understand
Whoa!
Why don't you just leave
Why can't you go
The feeling of relief
Even with this broken heart
(Chorus 3x)
What is the matter with me
Why do I continue down this path
Why can't I see
That you're no good to me
I can't pretend
That we were meant to be
I just want it to end
Whoa!
I just want it to end
(Chorus 4x)
I just want it to end___
~Everyone~
By: Desolate Cry
1/18/11
Met a friend
Lost a friend
Looks like she
Never got the hang of it
What's the deal?
What's the deal?
So what if she
Lost them
Why does it matter
Why does
Why does
Chorus:
Everyone
Everyone want her
To be someone she's not
They all want her
The real her to disappear
What are they looking for?
What are they looking for?
Why
Can't she be her
Everytime she makes a friend
They all tell her she's no good
They talk behind her back
They tell her what she should
What she should be
What she should
Everytime that girl tried to show the real "me"
What's the deal?
What's the deal?
With all of them
Why does
(Chorus 2x)
She can't pretend
That she isn't hurt
How long will she be waiting
For the pain to side
The Fading
In her clothes
Is how she feels deep inside
Tell me what's going on
What's going on
When she opens her eyes
She doesn't see that something is wrong
(Chours 3x)
Nothing can be perfect
Nothing is going to make it right
Nothing can take back what they say
She never gets it right
But she is sorry
Can't be the perfect
The perfect "me"
She can't be that girl
She's sorry that she can't be
That wonderful girl
They just don't understand
(Chours 4x)
Why can't she be her?
How can this happen to her?
She has no where to run
She tries to open her eyes
But she is blinded
By all that she tries
She can't make it go away
She just wants to scream
How could this happen to her?
Why do they want her to leave?
how could this happen to her?
~Now All That's Left~
By: Desolate Cry
1/18/11
She has a better way
To have a place
She loses herself
And she is a disgrace
When she lives this lie
Falling down
Into this crazy world
That smile turns to a frown
When this girl
Finally realizes
Chorus:
Now all that's left
Of "me"
Is what I
Pretend to be
Pretend to be
Now they all are
Leaving "me"
Leaving "me"
Now all that's left
Is the unwanted emptiness
Every personality
That she seems to bury
Comes and creeps through
They are brought out
It's haunting her
The shouts
that she feels
Inside this empty person
Breaks through the seals
All the pieces
Streams through
Her deep sinful eyes
(Chorus 2x)
She wishes
That she meant something to
Somebody else
It's turning her black and blue
She can't believe
This heart is bruised and sore
When the pressure of feeling
The pain buried deep inside
(chorus 3x)
The shadow of her own self
Follows her
The lies I have told
Has finally been seen
By the people that I held dear
The lie
My lie
Was finally worn thin
Leaving me crippled
And now my skin
Burns with guilt and pain
Of being a "nobody"
(chorus 4x)
