RokA's AvAtAR ReLieF

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Having problems with your avatar? This thread is one where you can get guidance from me, Bree. I'm here to help you, so don't be afraid to take full advantage of this thread.

Below, you can find three different sections (and a brief description of what they are for). These sections include rating, making DACs, and item advice. Please fill out the forms correctly for each of these sections or as near-perfect as you can (meaning, DON'T change the format). The codes are set up to be easy for you to fill out, and easy for me to decipher, so the more information you supply me with, the better.

**Note: I know that I may not have as much experience as some other individuals here on Menewsha, but I'm always an option if needed (or wanted) be. I'll reserve a post down below somewhere showing you what experience I do have if you decide you want my help. Keep in mind that the most I can do is provide suggestions on what you may want - I can't force you to choose one of my DACs/item suggestions over someone else's.

RokA's cReATions

These avatars are examples of ones that I've created in the year or two I've been on Menewsha. They range from simple to somewhat complicated, and vary in style.
*NOTE: Some of these avatars may have hair / eye / skin colors that don't go with the avatar, and that was because I was too lazy to change the hair / eye / skin color before I went onto the DAC. From now on, though, all of my DACs will be made on my mule account, Silent Sound, so that I may change the colors to match the avatar's outfit.
**NOTE: These avatars are purely mine. Please do not take them or copy them.

RATinGs

Please copy / paste this form into a reply post, and fill it out. DO NOT alter this code: it's easy for you to fill out and easy for me to read.

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[B]What am I rating?[/B]: [ Reference Picture of Avatar ]
[B]How am I rating?[/B]: [ This can be more than one of the following; Color, Theme, Layering, etc. ]

DReAm AvAtARs

Once again, please don't change the layout of this form. It's more crucial for this form than any other, since it affects what your dream avatar will look like.

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[SIZE=5][COLOR=#83d2c7][B][SIZE=4]i[/SIZE][/B] w[B][SIZE=4]A[/SIZE][/B]n[B][SIZE=4]T[/SIZE][/B] [B][SIZE=4]A[/SIZE][/B] [B][SIZE=4]DAC![/SIZE][/B][/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]
[B]Gender[/B]: [ male or female ]
[B]Colors to use[/B]: [ colors you want on your avatar ]
[B]Colors not to use[/B]: [ colors you don't want on your avatar ]
[B]Items wanted[/B]: [ items you want included ]
[B]Items not wanted[/B]: [ items you don't want on your avatar ]
[B]Simple, Complex, In-Between[/B]: [ how layered you want your avatar ]
[B]Gold Limit[/B]: [ how much you want to spend on your avatar ]

iTem ADvice

As above, don't change the layout.

[COLOR=#83d2c7][FONT=Franklin Gothic Medium]@Roka ; [ <--- remove space to ping me ]
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[B]Avatar[/B]: [ Reference picture ]
[B]Color[/B]: [ What color item do you want? ]
[B]Where[/B]: [ Where do you want it? (head, torso, waist, leg, shoes, etc) ]

DAC PickuPs

Pickup For bloodstainedwings
Pickup For Little Monster
Pickup For Ignis / Clementine
Pickup # 4
Pickup # 5

ReseRveD

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Bree declares this thread

oPen (:

Hey!!! You got your name changed:) I love it!

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:
How am I rating?: Layering and Coloring mostly:)

Originally Posted by CrimsonShadow

Hey!!! You got your name changed:) I love it!

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:
How am I rating?: Layering and Coloring mostly:)

Yes, I did. :heart:
Anyhow. I'm giving you a 8 / 10 for this one. I like the different color scheme, but I think you could use brown shoes, and a touch more brown on your head. I hate how the whites don't exactly match, but that's not your fault. The only real problem I have is that the whites all run together (the hair leads to the white shirt, the skirt to the white socks and shoes) which just makes these... threads of white.
Other than that, good job, lovie.

Thank you for the rate!! Now I have something to work off of:):heart:

No problemo.

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:
How am I rating?: Color and Layering.~ Please. :3

Originally Posted by Ignis

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:
How am I rating?: Color and Layering.~ Please. :3

This made my inner girl squeal.
I think that you need that lavender color on your head because the polar bear hat doesn't supply any of that, and the eyes aren't something that really counts. I would say to shorten the hair and put something of that light blue color on the arms, and then replace the white socks with the light blue ones that just came out.
Other than that, it looks fine. 8 / 10

Thank you for the suggestions and advice! It's much appreciated <3
I've been having trouble finding a lavender item for my head. I've looked everywhere and they are only really dark purple items available. :[ Do you know of any lavender items I could use for the head area?
I will look into the sleeves and socks change though. ;]
Thanks again<3

You could try the Purple Temptress Hairpin, though I'm not sure if it's the exact shade. There's the Sugarplum Fluffy Hairpins, the Lavender Headband, the Violet Organza, and the tiny circus hats, though I'm not sure if there's one that's purple and light blue. If none of those work out, I'm sure I can find something else.

The Purple Temptress Hairpin is soooo pretty, but sadly, it is darker than the other lavenders and so is the Violet Organza. The Sugarplum Fluffy Hairpins don't seem to go well with the outfit. The Lavender Headband is the right color, when I preview it--it shows under the polar bear hat and I see a little bit of it on the side of my head. Like a square shape thing. I don't know what to say about the head band. Is the MP previews the same as if you actually put on the item?

I believe so, yes. What you can try is changing the hair style so that the headband fits the avatar, though usually it doesn't make a difference. The only other option I can give you would be the lavender lotus hairpins, which I am wearing, though they have that tiny bit of yellow on the inside.

If neither of those work, you might want to consider getting a shorter hairstyle and changing it to purple, and then using the Chilled Beauty hairpin.

oh thanks! I considered adding yellow which would be a 5th color, but I don't think I'm ready to take on another color O_o
I'll try all of those ideas. Haha I took some notes. Just in case I forget.
You've been a big help!
I'll be sure to stop by when I need anymore advice <3

I'm glad I could help you. :heart:

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:
How am I rating?: Could I bug you for a general rating? For the colour, balance, etc etc? :D

Kiako: Why, of course.

I like the color scheme, as I'm one for unusual ones, so one of the first things I noticed is that the chocolate pillbox isn't the same color as the other three brown items (which really aren't the same color either). I also noticed that there's no little touch of lavender like there is everywhere else on your head, and that the green skirt and socks sort of create a lump of green in that area. However, I do know that it's hard to juggle so many colors and get it everywhere as perfectly as you can, so I guess those aren't too big of a deal.

Honestly, I love the item choice you've worked out here. I really haven't seen the new socks used (at least where I've been looking) and you nearly sent me to the shops with the skirt layering because I thought it was a new item, too.

Basically, 8 / 10 or an 8.5 / 10. I'm not really sure, to be honest. xD

Roka:
RaTe me, RokA!
What am I rating?:

How am I rating?: Colour, Theme, and Layering please.

flamethrower1391: I like the use of some of the items (blood, strappy items) because it really seems like she's an assassin. However, the legwarmers add TOO much blue, and the shoes and mouse don't fit at all. Why don't you expand more on the assassin theme? 3 / 10

Meh, Bree is lonely. :3