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Old 05-14-2011, 08:47 PM

Well this idea was orginally by a friend of mine and he made this rp on another website. So with his permission i brought it here and changed a few things to it to make a more original to me so here is the plot.

Plot-
The 2nd Angels vs Demons war was sparked when the angels heard of plans by the demons to destroy their civilization. Not everyone wanted to be involved in the war especially the human race(which had no idea it was even going on).

In the middle of this war a member of demon royalty took it apon herself to create a type of safe house or neutral zone for those not wanting to choose sides in the war. Whats at the safe house is only demons and fallen angels because the "pure" angels find that the owner could not be trusted due to the fact she is a demon.

Along with that the demons began making "living dolls" that could fight and not be killed. Some dolls even used as slave labor. Living dolls are life sized dolls that look human and are given artficaly created souls. Demons have even started using these dolls to impersonate the Angels and obtain information.

((something like that))

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Old 05-14-2011, 08:51 PM

Boo~ *Jumps up and down* Now what? xD

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Old 05-14-2011, 08:56 PM

er... help me write a better plot summary!? :D

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:08 PM

xD Lol, I'll do my best~

Luckily, my imagination is really flying out my brain right now~

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:12 PM

Thats good. I am never good with writing plots or descriptions. But i am perfectly fine with the actual role play.

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:32 PM

The world is falling into chaos, and now, the Angels and Demons have made their existence known to the Humans. At first, everyone was fine with it. But then, an unknown accident has caused the Angels to declare an everlasting war on the Demon race. With all the battles going on, many humans were killed in the process. Most of those humans were not involved.

As the war raged on, a brave demon of royalty made a stand. Said person made a neutral zone, a place for those surviving humans and "Fallen Angels." Not many Angels go there, since the creator of the neutral zone is a demon, there are few, but many of them are bitter towards the demons.

Along with this, the demons are making "Living Dolls" which are built to fight, and are unable to die. Basically, they are humans with artificial souls. Some are even used as slaves. Often they are used to infiltrate the Angel's base and spy on them.

This is the Neutral Zone, a place to get away from the madness, the insanity, and most of all, the bloodshed. You have no idea what goes on outside that area, and most people don't want to. There are so many battles, that the ground could be litters in corpses from both sides.

To be frank, if you don't want to fight in the war, or just want to break away from the constant wars and screams of terror, then the Safe House is the place to be.

[This okay Lens?]

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:34 PM

Thats perfect! i love it! If you dont mind i can copy and paste it into the official thread. :D

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:36 PM

Just credit me plz~

xDI'm very good at making Summaries for Rp's and plots too, not so much on actually following through on it ^^"

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:39 PM

i did. here is the official thread. Just dont post anything yet i am still fixing some stuff. Demonic Neutrality(under construction)

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:45 PM

I just realized, I spelled and wrong in the last sentence in the original, so just add that little n at and over there, cuz I'm really horrible at looking over my work D:

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:50 PM

XD i noticed the before but i forgot to change it. Ill do that now.

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:55 PM

X3 I'm so lazy D:

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Old 05-14-2011, 09:57 PM

No your not! I make typos all the time.

Now i have to work on the rules. hm... is there any that you think i should have?

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:07 PM

Um, no text chat, good grammar, and no All godly characters?

Using common sense, keeping it pg-13 or so, and.... Maybe put something in it so you know people read the rules, like a special title for the PM or something? Other than those, which are probably obvious, I think all those other simpler rules are important as well.

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:12 PM

there i added the rules. Do you think thats enough.

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:16 PM

Don't forget about the grammar and the no godly characters bit, there are was a roleplayer that ruined a good roleplay I joined because of those two things.~

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:18 PM

I put no godmode so that should already mean no godly characters. But I will add the grammer part. Also how about no happy-go-lucky characters?

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:22 PM

Lolz sure!~ mine is gonna be pretty evil, trying to destroy both sides b/c she's pissed off at the conflict.

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Old 05-14-2011, 10:23 PM

XD that will be fun!

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I think i can mark the thread as open now.

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Old 05-15-2011, 12:11 AM

Time to make my character then~

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Old 05-15-2011, 12:50 AM

Same here. Why isnt it letting me make two diffrent posts? It just combines them. D:

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Old 05-15-2011, 02:24 AM

There's a check box below the post thing, I think it says override double post~ I dunno try it~

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Old 05-15-2011, 02:27 AM

Ok ill do that.

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oh hey! it worked! :D

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Old 05-15-2011, 02:37 AM

Lol,

Also, anything that isn't yours, you have to put in quotes, or else the mods will be after you~

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Old 05-15-2011, 02:43 AM

really? wow the are relentless on here arent they? Well ill do that now.

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fixed it! hopefully.... did i do that right?

 


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