Lose the white tights and go with white short socks instead. I think seeing some of your skin in the lower half would be nice. :D

Lose the backgrounds maybe? They make some of the details on your avatar person kind of hard-to-see. D: Otherwise, it looks awesome. :)

Wow. Really nice avi. Don't change a thing. ^_^

Maybe get rid of one of the swords.

I'd say, lose the ankle wings

don't change a thing <3

The grey headband looks a bit weird with all the blues you have... It's not quite blue and it's not quite silver to match your belt..

Maybe take out one of the watery items. It's a bit much.

Some more purple on the head. I wish there was a purple Ayumi's bow.

don't change a thing.

Lose the rainbow butterflies. They don't add anything and are distracting. I see why you've got them, with the net and all, but maybe do some white fireflies instead?

Maybe a different background would be better. The pink and purple just don't suit it, I don't think

Don't change a thing. <3

I feel like the Vday 07 belt would look really great on your avvie SDG! I'm not wearing mine right now if you want to borrow it to try it out?

DOnt change a thing :D
Its just perfect in my eyes ;)

Don't change a thing, you look awesome.

Find a way to get more white on your head and maybe even the neck/shoulder area. :yes:

Don't change a thing :) I quite like it

don't change a thing I think she's cute.

Don't change a thing, I think it's awesome, especially with halloween coming up!

Don't change it. I love the way it looks!

Looks great, but the panda seems kind of extra. :O

;D Lookin' good hotstuff. LOL.

Maybe remove the smoke? There's a lot of white around your shoulders.

Leave it :3
I like it ^^