01-25-2012, 03:21 AM
Here's a short... chapter I wrote for my story. It was all I could manage with my Writer's Block.
Chapter One
I observe Jem from my seat across the room. He’s drawing in his pad again, another picture to add to his extensive collection. They’re everywhere, his portraits – the sudden splashes of colour against stark, white walls. He is so absorbed in his task that he doesn’t even acknowledge my presence. I turn my gaze from him to the white floor, a stray pencil sitting near my feet. I bend down to retrieve it, but hesitate, my fingers hovering only centimetres away from it. No one was fond of me touching their belongings. Don’t be irrational. You’re simply returning it. What could happen? Frowning, I reach out for the pencil, my fingers brushing the smooth object before it begins to dissipate and then, disappears completely. Cursing myself, I looked up, apprehensive about his response. Jem says nothing. He had been concentrating on his drawing. He hadn’t seen what had happened to that pencil. I sit upright and brush down my clothes, looking down at my hands. It had happened again.
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Five years earlier…
“Don’t touch.” Alec instructed me sharply as he led me through the castle hallways. I merely nodded, as I took the liberty of observing my surroundings. The interior was not extravagant. It was actually rather bleak. The walls were washed in white, and the only bursts of colour where the sombre paintings that were strung up here and there.
I was not aware of where he was taking me. In truth, I was not aware of how I had arrived at the castle. I only remembered waking up to see him gazing down at me, inspecting this uninvited guest. I had touched his ebony cloak, only to have it disperse beneath my fingers. I had been afraid, confused… Where was I? Who was I? Why did things disappear when I touched them? Alec had taken pity on me then. “Don’t be afraid. Come, take my hand.” I would never forget the tenderness in which he addressed me.
Critiques are welcome and encouraged. ^-^
Keep in mind I'm not much of a writer though. ><
Last edited by Crowfeather; 01-27-2012 at 12:59 AM..
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