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Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings
oh no. i always take it as positive critisism. and the harsher you are the better my entry will be because of it. if you were like "i dont like the hair" i wouldnt even know what i could do to make it better. but if you were like "the hair colour seems off, try using this item instead" its much more helpful.
right now im playing with the use of the new hair... but i think its going to get rejected because of the blue... but i just like it so im going to try to play with it a little
edit: the more i play with it the more i know its going to get rejected because of the blue.... poop. i like the addition of the blue... it cools the whole thing down a notch... oh well. without it is! so just the one i posted above for the reviewing. |
Sorry I was AFK to eat (^ w^')
Wow I like this one much better! Screams summer goddess to me. Nice job on the orange balance! Are you wearing the Kappa arms? The green on the one arm goes with the green in the bit of skirt and the shading in the clover headpiece & lilypad, I like that.
The whole head area has me torn between busy / cool. It's appealing, but it's the one area my eye lingers on because of it's layers. I'd maybe remove an item up there, or try and work more smaller details in elsewhere? Meh, but that's the thing, it'd be hard to add more and keep the items you have on. What items are all on your head?
I'm not in love with the green of the gloves being at the same level of the same shade of green in the skirt. I always try and avoid that with avatars. I like the belly, as it seems to go with the summery feel, and it helps balance out the amount of that lovely skin showing. lol I like the sun, clovers and lilypad. Working both yellow and gold in somehow works, along with the orange.
I guess the things that jump at me are the head layering / balance, and the gloves. But the overall feel of it is very fun. I try not to obsess over balance, but it is something I always notice.
