HAII! <3333
Can't wait to read it all <3
How many pages are we up to in that one?
Anything else we need to figure out?

Up to six pages. I don't know--either I say in the plot, "So through dangers untold, and hardships unnumbered, they fought their way to the Nai'Callait."

Or, I can get specific. Which one?

LOL! <3333
I love that line~

Up to you - the more specific you get, the more of a template we have to go by - the less specific you get, the more chance for writer's block, having to figure it out later, etc. - but again, it all depends on how much work you want to put into it - you've already done so much, I don't want you to feel overloaded :gonk:

Hmm... We could leave that part getting to the Nai'Callait vague and make it up as we go---kind of like RPing? =D What do you think about that?

I like that idea :3
That way we have a basic idea, but it's free reign as to what COULD happen :3

Excellent. And the plot goes on and on and on and on! Plot-ting peo-ple!

*Mai sings as she keeps working on the Coherent Plot*

Hehehe~
Have we passed 6 pages yet?

Just starting on six pages... I'm writing up the whole thing where they magically get through the Labyrinth in only a sentence or two.

That's only in the plot, of course. The fic will take longer. XD

Anyways, how many hours, do you think? They have thirteen, because that's the amount of time it took Sarah and I guess the Nai'Callait's rate of taking the Labyrinth out of time is reflecting that, right?

How about they don't realize how long it will take, until they're sheltering in the ballroom and the clock is still there, and Sarah realizes it's been thirteen hours. Jareth, of course, no longer sees the significance of this.

Oooh~
I thought you were on 6 pages earlier lol

Lol~
Of course :3

That's what I was thinking :3

Hmm~
That works~
So that could bring about the whole last dance thing - Sarah sees her time in being with him is coming to a close, and she wants one last dance to remember him by since there is no way she can save him - ya know what I mean?

Yeah. =D That sounds like it works. It could be a spur-of-the-moment thing, and Jareth is all, "You're nuts, woman," and Sarah is all, "WE'RE DANCING," and he's all, "...Yes'm."

Precisely!
And she can be all "You know, for wanting to reorder time and blahblahblah, you really have a crappy memory! So much for always loving me. The first time anythin bad happens, you forget it just like that! You egotistical idiot.. And you wondered why I never said yes!" XDDD
-not in those words, but you get my point xD;-

So... how long were they going to take to get through the Labyrinth again?

...And what about if like some of Jareth's power got back into him somehow from the Nai'Callait, enough for him to teleport? Because I don't know how they'd get to the edge of the Labyrinth and back in only thirteen hours, based on how long it took Sarah. Then again, Jareth was a jerk-face and detracted an hour, and then he kept her in the ballroom for who knows how long (do you know how long?)...

13 hours xD;

She beat him just seconds short of 13 hours lol
So yeah - I'd say he gets the teleport thing back when Nai' is confused from Sarah's change of heart :3
And he took 3 hours off, didn't he?
-couldn't have sworn it went front 10 to 7- maybe it was only 8 to 7 lol
I dunno without re-watching~
And no - not sure on the ballroom time without watching it again lol
The clock WAS shown there - just can't remember the time on it :(

I'd check, but my trial of Vegas has expired. Hmmm. I'll check later. Right now I gotta go to the library so I can get stuff for my research paper.

I can check tonight after I get back from the movies if you'd like :3

Good luck Mai-chan! <333

Oh my gosh, Emma. How about Jareth's memories of love for Sarah that the Nai'Callait stole react to Sarah defending Jareth out of love? So they somehow like... Attach themselves to her, and thus bring a little bit of Jareth's magic with them?

...Wait. She's defending Jareth, and she gets hurt by the Nai'Callait as a consequence, correct? What if some of Jareth's powers attach themselves to her THEN, reacting to her strong feelings for Jareth? And as the power comes to her, so do his memories of love for her?

And then she wants Jareth to be safe, and Jareth's memories react to THAT, and so does his power as consequence, and THAT'S how they get back to the castle, through Sarah's unknowing transportation of them with Jareth's powers?

Okay.. I thought I got it, then I didn't, then I thought I got, but nope XD;
Try explaining again? :gonk:
-noms on soup to try and settle stomach-

Uh...

1. Nai'Callait attacks.
2. Jareth is about to get hurt.
3. Sarah defends him, but gets hurt instead.
4. Nai'Callait previously absorbed Jareth's memories and magic because of his depression
5. The memories react to Sarah's love for Jareth.
6. Sarah absorbs some of Jareth's magic when she's attacked by the Nai'Callait.
7. After Jareth and Sarah get away, she wants them to be safe, and unwittingly transports them back to the castle.
8. Because she now, unknowingly, has Jareth's powers.

Oooh!
Gotcha :3
Sounds good to me!

..Waittt...
But doesn't that kind of sound like A Touch of Faerie? o.O;
With the whole 'Sarah getting Jareth's magic after saving his life' thing?
Or are there many that have that so it's not as uncommon as I think?
-has only thread a handful of Fanfics-

Oh. You might be right. D8 I thought it would be like a way to get Jareth's memories back to him, when they kiss, because Sarah so desperately wants him to remember her.

It makes sense :3
Why don't we just do it?
I rather like the idea, and it ties what we want to happen to happen in a more likely event - than if it were just a kiss doing it (kind of a Disney ending, neh?)
That gives it a bit more depth :3

YAAAY. Okay, we'll do it like that then.

*Mai scurries off to work on the Coherent Plot*

Haiii! <33
Can't wait to read it all once you have it done ;D <33

Allllmost finished! 8D I'm at the part where they're back at the castle after fighting the Nai'Callait.

YAYYY!
I can't wait to sit down and read it all <333
THEN WE CAN START WORKING ON IT NEXT MONTH ONCE YOU'RE ON BREAK FROM COLLEGE!!
If you're not busy with home stuff, of course :3