I love love love it!!!
Please post more, I'm a fan already!

I did notice in the second page of the manga you posted, the bartender's arms look a little weird. Especially the one that's holding the rag.
You have an awesome grasp of this, I love it!

Other than that, I'd like to see some more detail in the panels, like with the background and the shading. I think if you had that, I wouldn't be able to tell the difference from an amateur manga and a published one. :)

Next two pages of the manga up, I'll try to remember to get the next couple scanned soon.

Gorgeous work! I really love the character sketches. You're very good at poses and facial expressions. I love the softness of your characters' faces, too. Very lovely! The story seems very interesting, too. I'd love to see more! ^^

Thanks ^^ I'm still working on expressions though, they never seem to have enough emotion to me...

I favor the characer look to the left too xD Gotta practice facing right.

More ish coming soon...I need to get an account on a webcomic site, lol

O_o My bad, thought I was making a new topic, sorry for the double post!

Lucky Sevens! -waves frantically- It's time to bring this thread back to life!

So, the question we all want to know is....Have you finished anymore pages?

those are really good. the only thing i noticed that i don't find quite right is in the first pic. in one of his standing positions, you kinda gave him a bit of a girly pose. where the knees are turned in like that, that's a rare pose for a guy. you're more likely to find that in a girl.

still, really good!

I love the way that character looks. I can tell there is a good story behind just how it looks. I would like to see that character colored ^^