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Old 12-30-2009, 07:20 AM

Share with me haiku now
one made of lovely words, dear
make it last all day

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Get out of my house!
What? You say this is YOUR house
And I should get out?

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Old 12-30-2009, 07:44 AM

uhm. poetry........

5,7,5, right?

ahem:

i don't have on pants
why should i bother with those?
i have my manties

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Old 12-30-2009, 08:04 AM

A winter days dream
A life filled with happiness
Why must I awake?

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Old 12-30-2009, 10:35 AM

Love is bitter sweet
Unless you have met that one
Whom makes your heart sing <3

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Old 12-30-2009, 03:18 PM

I'll be moving this thread on over to the poetry subforum in Lit Spot where it belongs. :yes:

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Old 12-31-2009, 12:13 AM

ice cream is the best
but it makes a crazy mess
time to have some pie.

by me!

Aw, I like it. <3 no stealing, please (not that I think any of you'd steal it. it's solely precautionary)

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Old 12-31-2009, 02:23 AM

You guys are writing Senryu.... except for "Vanidar" of course ^_^
Haiku is about seasons.

ANYWAY,


animal crackers
they're a very good snack
but don't eat too much

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Old 12-31-2009, 03:14 AM

Bunai knows her stuff. okay, then here's a real haiku.

springtime is not fun.
bugs are all over the place.
time to buy bug spray.

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Old 12-31-2009, 04:14 AM

Actually, Haiku can be about things other than the seasons. It's nature in general. Here's another

Snow blankets the ground
In deathly quiet, the earth sleeps
In spring she'll awake

Or even:

Rain falls down in sheets
Tree roots soak up the wetness
New life will soon show

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Old 12-31-2009, 07:41 AM

Yeh, I did a catch all thing there. ^_^;;
I am better at senryu than haiku... I guess I need humor.

Lets see. hmm
Since the Alien movie is on

"Facehugger clings tight
A deep kiss is happening
Careful of acid."

 


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