View Poll Results: Whats your thoughts on hotel life?
Never stayed in one. 10 8.77%
Meh, they're utilitarian, I don't care one way or the other. 30 26.32%
Ick, they're all gross, I hate having to stay in them. 6 5.26%
Love it! Each stay is a mini vacation! 68 59.65%
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BlackSwan317
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#4176
Old 12-14-2010, 08:51 AM

He is creepy, don't get me wrong, just in a very... endearing? way.... I wish my phone processed this faster :-p

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#4177
Old 12-14-2010, 08:56 AM

I had a dream about cannibals. Religion brain washed cannibals that lived in the desert. <.<

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#4178
Old 12-14-2010, 08:57 AM

He's like a 12-year old that knows he's done something wrong and wants to apologize but isn't sure why...

Zephi: All those things are oddly similar to what goes on in The Bend... >_>

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#4179
Old 12-14-2010, 08:59 AM

The Bend? What is Th Bend? And why are they putting their stories into my dreams :gonk:

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#4180
Old 12-14-2010, 09:01 AM

o_o

The Bend is my webcomic.

The Bend - Updates Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday

It features cannibals, cults, desert mythologies, and general drunkenness.

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#4181
Old 12-14-2010, 09:04 AM

Woot drunkenness!

*tries her very best to make a face like garrets usual sly face*

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#4182
Old 12-14-2010, 09:07 AM

Ah... well... I havent' looked at your web comic :(

I don't know how your ideas would be getting into my head but I don't like em. But then again, they do make for a good story in my dream thread. I wrote all about it:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/commun...-times-38.html

If you want to take a look at it.
I book marked your web comic <.<
I like sluggy though. >.>

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#4183
Old 12-14-2010, 09:10 AM

Okay, so not exactly like The Bend, but has similar elements to it.

You're allowed to like sluggy.

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#4184
Old 12-14-2010, 09:12 AM

It was odd. But then again, most of my dreams are. Hmmm...

Well thanks. I... I do like sluggy. A lot. But it's gotten really really wordy the past few years. No more quick jokes or puns. Well, not as many it seems.

I'll have to put aside some time to look into yours. I might have a new favorite :P

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#4185
Old 12-14-2010, 09:16 AM

That often happens as a story progresses. Writing changes when the story moves on. xD

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#4186
Old 12-14-2010, 09:19 AM

Yeah. I know. But ti was perfect. In the beginning, it was perfect.

I miss the good old days I guess.

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#4187
Old 12-14-2010, 09:20 AM

-shrug- Can't deny a story when it comes to you, I suppose. ^^

That's how I write, anyways...

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#4188
Old 12-14-2010, 09:32 AM

I notice that my writing style changes over time. Storys that I have yet to finish, when I go back and look at them, I wish that I could get that feeling and fall back into the way that I used to write. But then again, I wish I could make it mroe detailed, so I end up re-writing everything. Thus my problem and reason why I never finish any stories :stare:

I smell dog food.

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#4189
Old 12-14-2010, 09:35 AM

Quote:
You sure can go from nervous to unnerving without skipping a beat
^like that line too^

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#4190
Old 12-14-2010, 09:43 AM

Wow, Swan. You're a lot further along than I thought you'd be navigating via phone... xD

Zephi: See, that's why I think its important to keep on writing, regardless of how much the style degrades. Just keep writing until you finish it, and then go back and edit it with fresh eyes. Otherwise you end up like this lady I once worked with who kept trying to publish her half-written vampire novels. >_>

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#4191
Old 12-14-2010, 09:48 AM

Well I won't try to publish anything but I get to these points and I just get... stuck. Like I am now. And it all started with a name. I just couldn't come up with a good name for a place and it drained me completely of my writing energy. T^T

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#4192
Old 12-14-2010, 09:50 AM

What my girlfriend does is she comes up with a placeholder name and then changes it accordingly when it comes time for editing.

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#4193
Old 12-14-2010, 09:54 AM

I just left it blank... it's not giving it the right feel though. The place is supposed to be a prison that's inside a mountain, where it's common knowledge that whoever goes there isn't coming back out. And there's a lot of torture going on there. I want a not so scary sounding name, but original.... I can't come up with anything. T^T

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#4194
Old 12-14-2010, 09:57 AM

Well, I'm a big fan of referencing history or language when it comes to naming places. And everyone loves Alcatraz! =D

...which makes me think of "Albatross." But that's more an appropriate name for a pirate ship.

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#4195
Old 12-14-2010, 10:00 AM

Hmmm... yeah that would work but its a completely fictional world full of dragons and winglies and furrs. :lol: Something that sounds impregnable......... and why does that word sound like something that would get pregnant!? I mean... unescapable. Maybe that wors out better.

Abandon all hope ye who enter here.

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#4196
Old 12-14-2010, 10:16 AM

Impregnable. Im = not. Preg = to infiltrate. Able = having the capability of.

I'm thinking you should call it something with a lot of harsh consonants. K's and T's. Very draconian-sounding. =]

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#4197
Old 12-14-2010, 10:22 AM

Hello. :D I like staying at hotels. :D You never have to clean your room when you leave. :P

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#4198
Old 12-14-2010, 10:24 AM

GOOD MORNING CHOCOBOY! =DD

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#4199
Old 12-14-2010, 10:24 AM

That sounds like a good idea Hyena... T's and K's... make it sound harsh and stuff... hmmm... I guess the easiest thing to do in this case it so make up a completely original name.

Hey chocoboy.... are you following me <.<

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#4200
Old 12-14-2010, 10:25 AM

Good morning hyena. :sweat: Your name make me nervous, if I was a real chocobo I think it might be worse though. *mutters "Don't eat me, please"*

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I'm not following you... not really.... just going to the active threads I guess.

 



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